I wish he could make another basketball novel where the main characters abilities are a bit toned down, similar to Rebound. I still like this novel, just became a bit less interesting after he became so OP he could easily annihilate LeBron 21-0.
I am not really good at writing reviews but well I want to write a review for this book. I do enjoy reading the book and I feel that this book is well... good to read? like i said I am not too good at this but I would like the author to know that I like this book and wish that there would be more updates and longer chapters cause they kind feel a tad short.
Hello everyone ...As this the first book I'm writing, I'll be very hopeful. I don't have much experience as a writer, but I hope I don't disappoint too much...I hope this book manages to capture your attention and keep it all the way...
It is Netorare and a heroine gets r*p*d FYI. The way it is presented some may be able to accept it but have no delusions the MC does get cuckolded. Overall not a bad way to pass time if you can ignore the other stuff.
This novel is about a boy called Harry who was born without the ability to draw mana in a world of magic He got a system and started his journey as a manaless mage It’s a really intersting novelTry out this novel,you won’t regret reading it Let’s keep rating⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️?????
I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more .
You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-.
Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf.
The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing.
He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back.
He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ??????
OK i stop writing because i would just get worse .
The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ...
1. His gf doesn't exits.
2. She is much more thankful to him.
3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should
you know how these kinds of stories goes, faceslaping here and there, some youngmaster that doesn't see mount tai until too late, smurf here and there, but seems like it doesn't end because it was banned or something like that. so don't waste your coins in this one.
Even though the story is full of cliché(s) so far but the way the author has used them in the story is quite good to keep the story interesting, well atleast until the current chapter cause I have only read it so much. Hope the story remains the same in the future aswell.
Untuk seorang yang kembali kemasalalu, Mc memiliki mentalitas yang buruk.
Terutama pada bagian dimana Mc banyak omong kosong saat bertarung, bagi mereka yang memiliki banyak pengalaman hidup dan mati, sangat konyol melihat Mc yang melakukan tindakan idiot disaat pertempuran. Bahkan olah raga lari ringan membutuhkan metode pernafasan yang tepat untuk menjaga stamina, tapi Mc sedang dalam pertarungan hidup dan mati tapi malah mengatakan omong kosong ditengah pertempuran, hanya pemula yang akan memiliki banyak pemikiran disaat pertempuran sengit terjadi, dan juga sangat idiot untuk berteriak kepada monster yang belum tentu mengerti bahasa manusia, bahkan jika Mc ingin melakukan provokasi terhadap musuh, pasti ada banyak cara yang lebih efektif terhadap monster.
Selain pada bagian aksi yang buruk, bagian lain dalam novel ini cukup klise karena sebagian besar alur cerita didalam novel ini telah digunakan pada beberapa novel lainnya.
Dan saya cukup mengerti karena ini novel pertamamu, tapi saya pikir lebih baik untuk memiliki bab yang lebih pendek tapi tidak memiliki banyak kekurangan. Karena semakin banyak kata berarti lebih banyak kemungkinan kesalahan yang akan muncul didalamnya, tapi semakin sederhana sesuatu maka semakin sedikit kemungkinan kesalahan didalamnya. Lagipula ini adalah karya pertamamu, lebih baik mempuat novel dengan lebih sedikit kata tapi tanpa banyak kekurangan didalamnya, daripada novel dengan banyak kata tapi justru menjadi novel yang penuh omong kosong didalamnya.
Just reading the it make me happy that I have read it like three times already so please update more because it a really great novel and I would like to read more
It was really good reading a story that actually reminds of your crush suddenly after long period of time even tho there was no such scene as this but this story is creating a really good romantic imagination
Keep up the good work
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