Was genuinely shocked with the amount of detail and thought behind the plot and his decisions, definitely worth the read.
the book is nice it has the perfect op situation
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A book with intriguing and captivating plot. The grammars and character descriptions are okay,Keep it up.
Wow, just started and this is very compelling, love the world background, I'd read this a million times. This is really killing my misogynist side, author did a great job! !❤️❤️❤️???
More chapters please
Stopped reading at chapter 63 (almost all of the free chapters) and my verdict is that this story is.....annoying.
Annoying in that the author is constantly teasing readers by not revealing the ML's status to everyone this whole time. The reason it's annoying is because a person that is as stupidly stubborn towards their own family as the FML exists. And she has a husband who has the power to fix all the problems, but loves her so much that he wants her to show everyone what she is made of.
So the problem is that the characters are realistic, and that they've just been running around this problem for so long now, all so that the author can write in face-slapping events. IMO, since he wants her to show how great she is to everyone, it could still be easily solved by publicizing his status, and then giving her free reign over her own companies to spread her wings.
Other than that, the story starts off a bit awkwardly in that it doesn't talk about his coming-up story, and although not perfect, there are very few grammatical errors, so it isn't hard to read. The world is a mix of modern day and fantasy, with mentions of modern companies and whatnot
Overall, a fast-paced action story that unwinds rather quickly around the few key characters. The actions and combat are adequately portrayed, but the structure of paragraphs with intertwining dialogues and action could be a little more spaced out, giving each individual piece of content some room to breathe.
The story transitions from scene to scene like a tv show, shifting in tone, story beats, atmosphere swiftly, though the exposition at times can be a little heavy.
A story with a lot of potential, and with time, the rough edges could be trimmed off, revealing the true gem behind it.
From the synopsis, the mc looks like he’s going to become a masochist. Reminds me a little of Lin Fan from TSS
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Listen, I was a fan of this webnovel. Then they wrote in a r*pe scene and tried to normalize it (most recent chapter). Don't care how the protag feels about it, the author made a choice to include that into the story and now I can't read a webnovel I WAS enjoying in good faith.
And I checked, there is no r*pe warning in the tags for this novel.
One of my favourite novel. Although it is worthy of being a premium but I don't want it to be!!! This novel being on webnovel makes it convenient for reading daily though but please update more. Don't stop it's release on here.