Ghost Rider in Twilight/TVD/TO

28 year old 'teenager' That should say enough about this story.



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Interesting concept. But poorly written. Main character is too overpowered right at the start. And the other two wishes besides Ghost Rider powers are too.. weird. Mastery of all talents? That's too OP. Looking like an anime character in the world of Twilight/The Originals? Too out of place. Upgrading computers and creating your own AI days after arriving in that world? Very ridiculous. You gotta take things slow man. Do some character building. Don't give him everything right from the very start. And make things a bit more realistic to the world setting.

Just poorly executed and OPMC right off the rip nothing soecial or good here it's rushed and poorly thought out he gets 3 wishes and 1 is Master of ALL talents and immediately ruins any interest in the fic by building a AI right off the bat nah I'm out this is gonna be a jumbled mess and I'm not sticking around to watch the Dumpster fire burn

Hey , you know. good twillight fanfictions are very rare. And i really like the ghost riderxtl idea so please dont give up this story bro. I know its very hard in prime time. I hope you keep writing this story.... ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Would have been great if the author was someone else. The story has potential but is horribly rushed by the author. The grammar is awful and confusing. Half the time you don’t know who’s talking because there are no clues. The mc himself seems really dumb and useless. The whole story is trash and although I get what the author is trying to do it’s poorly executed.

I’m both happy and annoyed to read this book. The reason why I am happy is because it’s an awesome book ?????. The reason I’m annoyed is because the author only uploads two chapters a week ?.