This had a good start, but it's been going downhill lately. I don't mind slow-paced novels but everything in this novel has grinded to a halt. Every mission is a fruitless endeavor leading nowhere. Every chapter has a barrage of pointless questions that rarely get answered. The last couple chapters had over 50 questions each. (Never counted them before.) Questions like " What? How? What's going on? W-Why? why? why? why? Why you get nervous man?" Kairen: I-I don't...I don't k-know?.. The protagonist also stutters a lot. If you've ever been around someone who asked a million questions and enjoyed the experience, this novel is definitely for you.There's still hope if the author gets back on track. I would suggest taking some time off to flesh out the story and character development. Releasing a couple quality chapters per week would be better than this type of filler.
The book is great, a nice read rather. The Mc is not that bad and I'm quite enjoying him. World-building is okay and the plot is well sorted out.
So far this book is great! I love the character design and the way he thinks. It is a great thing to relate to a main character and really brings you into their world. Evan though might be a bit of an issue with how sheltered he is but he is still young.
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one of the best webnovels i've ever read, the author did really great making the characters alive with their interactions, its really enjoyable to read, also the autor kindly answers your comments and its also funny himself, i highly recommend reading this.
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I think writer should elaborated on things, make details and re-read what your write and adding some word that make reader interesting in them. Theres so many cultivation story out there, compare your writing, to me, your writing is just 2.5 but your story, OMG! I give full mark for them coz I juz got hook by the background story.... well done for that. This is not criticism but a constructive comment based on what I read. Sorry if u hurt and thank U for this story! Keep on it! Good work! U juz need Xperience, so just write. Cheers!!
Have you ever just randomly browsed WN in search of a good novel and stumble across a absolute gem? Ifyour reading this review than chances are the answer to that question is yes.
Evil mc I hope the author keep like this I’ enjoying reading this novel if u r looking for evil mc that slaughter and do anything to level up this u go btw I hope the author doesn’t introduce poison to the novel or harem or romance m
The good-for-nothing cultivator is a romance-cultivation story between Lu Qingyun and Qin Keqin. He is a first realm cultivator while she is a seventh realm cultivator with a mysterious past. Read how Lu Qingyun cultivates from a lowly cultivator to a monstrous genius cultivator as he tries to impress the love of his life. TGFNC is a light story. There won't be lots of killings *roll eyes* or flying cultivators (basically, it is more down to earth) and closer to Xianxia than Xuanhuan. If you enjoy the story, please add to your collection and support with power stones for my motivation;)
At chapter 5, dropped, 3.8 stars from me.Although I can't say anything, I already read enough and this types of novels isn't enough to interest me.So for people, this novel is extremely similar to [ I am a superstar ] The world entertainment industry is extremely lacking behind, thus mc uses his knowledge to create LOL for example or popular novels such as [ Library of heaven's path ]Though with a luck cube of some sort.This must be enough info for y'all to not hate on for posting a review for only reading 5 chapters
I read up to about chapter 28, but I just couldnt buy the characters choices. He gets roped into becoming a drug dealer or worse, his bouncer, for no reason at all. He's the land lord, and he's in the position to be a witness, and he's the kid with no motive. Anything happens to him and it's all over for that guy. He's got the power, but he caves like a total beta, yet it's clear that's not where the author wants to go with the MC. It looks like the author wants the MC to become some, raging, alpha, badass from the 80' or 90's who smokes, deals drug, drives a bike, and bangs girls that look and act like hookers. Sorry, even if it made sense, it doesn't, that's not actually so cool. Cool wouldn't have to try so hard to look cool.