why is this gone from trial read?i thought
it's got chosen already and only wait for release..................................................
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I think the one major drawback of this novel is the main character. He is way too impatient about everything. You'd think a guy who spent years in a wheelchair, saw his mother almost get assassinated, and thinks his brother's death was part of some conspiracy would try to lay a bit lower and increase his strength more. I mean per the novel the MC's brother was roughly 20 times more powerful than the MC is at chapter 25 and had way more real world experience and the MC is trying to rush to figure out what happened to him. Maybe get stronger first.
The world background seems relatively interesting. The other characters seem to be written with more sense than the MC which is nice. The problem is that they aren't the person you are reading about. The story development feels a bit rushed mostly because of the MC's personality.
I quite like it. Its a nice story and it can definitely be good as the story progresses. Its a good base building story and is has a very quick pace.
mi like!
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mossssst stupid
mossssst idiot arrogant MC i have ever seen
**** you author
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I just love this book enough that I’m willing to give it another great review. (Plus reviews give the daily 5 exp) I would recommend this book to any chem nerd with an interest in magic.
Well the character is not too stupid or an 'angel' like which is the best for me and I personally love the story. Don't regret reading it!
I must say that normally I'm not into thriller or detective's stories. Yet, the author caught my attention from first; the title, them by the synopsis... And of course the story itself. The suspense in this book is just breathtaking.
I highly recommend this book! And I'll surely keep on reading it! Good job author✨
Great novel I need more chapters.
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