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There are little to none grammatical errors, the story devolpment is really interesting and novel, the charachet design is well made and the characters aren't 2d, What can i say? I only wish to see more chapters!
This novel is good for a quick fun read. It is definitely a comedy genre novel, so don’t click on it expecting dog-blood drama or hot-blooded protagonists.
Personally, I think that the best part of this novel is learning about the alternate earth that it is set in. Humans can live to be over 200 years old, with the publically known oldest being 280. Of course, the MC is several hundred millenia old, and has the historical artifacts to prove it.
Summary: popular alternate-universe celebrities are participating in a reality tv series, and happen to encounter the MC who is living in a small village. The MC’s house is full of super-expensive items, which shocke the world when experts analyze it. For the public, even the food the MC eats can make A-level celebrities bankrupt, but to the MC it’s just low-level items that he’s been gifted ‘recently’.
TLDR: a good comest story for a quick read, but almost no potential as a popular novel
AUTHOR WHYYYYY?? Why did you make this so good that it makes it hard to find stories like this.....Def in top 5 easy.. I have read 1400+ mangas and 600+ cultivation and fair share of LN and this is easily in top 5
I would love it if only the MC was an adult.
Instead of a(literally impossible)baby
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This is a terrible translation. I gave up on the story because of this. it regularly has chapters telling different versions of the same part of the story, immediately after each other. (for example version one the master is looking for a new disciple, sees a promising recruit, and the rest of the chapter tells of the recruitment. But the next chapter is version two so suddenly the would be disciple has come to the sect to apply for membership, and the master notices this promising disciple for the first time and the chapter ends with the recruitment, only for the next chapter to be version three of this scenario of the master recruiting the disciple.) I dragged myself through two loops like this, and I just can't go through it again. It's frustrating because I think the actual original story is really good so if the issues were fixed, or if a whole new translation was added to the site, I would definitely give it another shot.
Decided to write 2 comment.
If we assume that mc is on hardest diff lv then this novel is low trash quality copy of 'tutorial is too hard" but instead of tower you get normal society.
1) Author informs us that MC is not really good at anything other then gaming.
2) By the time school best players get to 2lv and get invited to special group for best players. MC is nearly catching up on hardest lv to group lv.
3)Most players are playing on easy/medium lv, developer lv of difficulty of mc is not just 1or 2 stages higher but over 4(easy-medium-hard-very hard-hell-... don't remember if more).
4) The 1floor =tutorial is based on jumping and mc is able to clear it "slow-by author opinion" but the reality is he did it super fast. He who is on god(developer) lv difficulty and he who has 0exp with sport is able to clear this tutorial and catch up to others who play 4lv of difficulty lower then him , and get admitted to exclusive group of elite players.
If you ask me this novel is golden spoon and wish fulfilling by author. I SUGEST DROPPING IT!
Man, this site is down BAAAAD, it's gotten to parodying parodies level bad, this is a clone of another chinese ability steal premise book, just 10 times worse, that in turn was again a heavily inspired clone of that Korean manhwa/light novel franchise talent swallowing magician that even directly ripped off some small tropes from it, god awful!
Really giving me Squid Game vibes here, what with the old man and all. I have zero complaints about this novel, as I very thoroughly enjoyed Squid Game. This isn't a rip-off or anything though, as it comes with it's own unique twists (you can read it for yourself to see what I mean).
Only thing that I would recommend to the author is... well, writing more. Daily updates are critical to gaining readership. Keep up the good work!
There are days where you're looking for a grand and epic saga that details the MC conquering the world and defeating enemies left and right. Sometimes there are people who enjoy reading couples play with each other as the MC's "dragon" becomes a powerful sword that swivels and crushes through the yin of fairies and beauties.
THEN there are days where you want to read something light, fun, comedic. A story that will get you enough chuckles as you go along a journey that's both familiar and unique at the same time.
Where are people who hate Romance? Who hate Harem? Where are those who are tired of seeing big-tiddy anime waifu demon succubus and jade beauties falling left and right in the young master's den of 'lewdness'?
Even hand-holding is disallowed, perv! >///<
Come here and find comfort and relief as Albert, the dog demon will BONK anyone and bring them justice!
I have incredibly high hopes for the readers to find themselves happy and excited. This book is also written by Fixten who is a great author known to finish their works. So what are you waiting for? Strap in and get yourselves a ride as we travel worlds and watch a shiba inu BONK and LEVEL UP!
Please give love to Fixten's new book because I do, I love it so much that my passion is unmatched by others! Being 'lewd' all the time is incredibly tiring, Readers. Go refresh and rejuvenate by reading Fixten's book ;-;
The story is very good, I love the development of events.... Please post more chapters soon .
There is a lot of information that we still can't get the point of, but that information gives some mystery to your story. I'm not sure, but I think your novel will be in the top 100 Internet novels. Goodbye, have a nice day.
Hmm really a interesting story.......
Its well written and gets more and more interesting with each chapter...................................
