Kelvin_Sekwati7f
So far read every chapter. Opinion, unique and thoroughly enjoyable. I'd even go far as to say if you could keep this up for a couple thousand chapters you would have 3 or so seasons of an anime that would be absolutely ******* awesome to watch. I'm impressed, keep this novel rolling Author, I'd take this one all the way.
Author here. So I reuploaded this cause it fit the WPC. I might as well try right? Anyways, get ready for more crack inducing chapters and maybe even more.
This genre is not really my cup of tea but still looks pretty interesting and has quite a potential.
Keep up the good work!
Y'all should def give it a read if this genre interests you.
I must admit you're doing great godly cat keep it up
Thank you, everyone, for reading my new novel. please give me your valuable suggestions with which I make sure that the future chapters are more interesting and attractive for all the readers[img=recommend]
I, as a shameless author, will give five stars.
This is my first real story after trial and error. This story is not with a system with omnipotent ability, especially level system, and shop!!!
My Manager is just helper you know!!
My story is about the life after a big disaster. How civilization when they live in the wilderness. And how MC will live with his spirit land. Okay, I admit that MC is shameless enough to receive the cheat.
Of course, it's just my review for the first volume.
I hope all of you will enjoy my story.
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If you've read the "Legendary Mechanic
Archer is really immature and a psychopath don't what's wrong with him doing Humpy Dumpy in middle of no where killing dogs nad eating their hearts out. That's some psycholathic tendency my boi... and the way he laughs at every second while talking with girls is really creepy... when he stares at dark elf chest her thought was he was admiring her beauty not seeing it lustfully it's like peeking at your neighboring bench answer sheet and when get caught the examiner thinks he just clearing some doubts. Doesn't make sense right?
I think this is a book worth reading. It's consistent, has character growth with well defined personalities, and makes you anxious to read the next chapter just to find out what happens next. I also like how the author takes his time to gradually build the harem. It's not a rushed story and a lot of thought is put into it.
The MC really needs to start taking charge of his secretary however and add her. He's a dunce when it comes to women but he's a take charge guy who does what needs to be done for the betterment of all. His stupidity when it comes to women is a bit out of place as a high profile CEO. CEOs should be good in dealing with men and women to have a successful business. This so far, is the only negative I see about the MC. He needs to sleep with his secretary.
This is a gem!!! Please help to choose this work with real potential.
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Translation of this novel is terrible. Simple terms like “cultivator” is instead translated as “fairy”. Don’t even get me started on the cultivation techniques the MC finds.
There are also other inconsistencies which makes you sometimes have to reread a sentence. Some sentences even look like machine translation. All of these small details result in a crappy reading experience.
All in all it shows that 0 proof reading was done or that the translator might not be that experienced.
While I would like to give kudos for what the translator has done to make the story understandable I’m more frustrated as this has happened on a lot of novels, so obviously it is either an easy mistake to make or it’s always the same translator. No change will be made as no translator reads these comments.
Story seemed like a good time waster if you can deal with the translation.
