One of my favorite stories on here. The party dynamic is fun, the characters themselves have their goofy moments but at the same time feel fully realized, and Jotou is wonderful as a protagonist. She’s flawed but can use those flaws as a strength, struggles with growth in an interesting and engaging way and it’s just wonderful how those struggles play off of the rest of the party. Plus, as a trans woman, her utter nonchalance at the genderbending tickles me.The relationships between characters is probably my favorite part of the story. The characters rib eachother to express their care and play off of eachother while still getting serious if the situation calls for it.Overall, wonderful, the story does an amazing job balancing serious and severe situations with comedic and playful ones without it seeming out of place or one overwhelming the other. I’ll immediately eating up anything this author writes, and keep up the great work.
While the background does have a lot of western fantasy, the story does not suffer from it at all. Every chapter is well written and descriptive without being boring, no matter the content. The characters are nice and work well with the story. This story is impeccable.Keep up the good work.
Never! Never! Never!
Zip!
"To the God, please dont let your servant fall to toxidness of human. Keep us away from ridicoulus of human. Omewa mo shinderu."
"H I T L E R."
That value is not too important because its never noticed by the teachers but still, they write those values.
Dark took the knife and scratched his hand and then the blood flowed into the cauldron.
"Ma Elliot of the Empire Of Zulim, Senior. A GrandElder 1st stage Qi and just a lowly king of a 3rd rate kingdom" Respectfully answered by elder ma together with a two fist bumps bow.
Nice story....
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"I know completely well why andhowyou came here," Alucard interrupted them. "You wormed your way into this meeting through blackmail and veiled threats. You were taking advantage of the fact that two of my comrades had a girl with them that needed help.Whyshould we even want to talk to you?"