it is a book with potential. I love it though and it release a kind if loveable tension. Great job author.
from ch 1 all the hype then something is going to happen whether a person comes or phone calls. why write this kind of story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
"From the title alone, I knew I was in for something exciting — and you delivered. Keep up the amazing work!"
I really enjoying this story and hoping more updates keep coming
i guess i should review my story to push it out a bit. im just going to say some random stuff like i am now to get 140 words in and make it a valid review. anyway if you're reading this, the story is about the main character disobeying the world he lives in and going berserk many times over, leading him to gain the king's attention and become wanted. later on it becomes more apocalyptic, well how i've planned it so far anyway. you'll just have to read to find out. Woah, this is way more than 140 words, i'll post it now
Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
the character desgin are great and interesting story telling.
Not bad, but a bit of a very sleepy read.
The story grabs attention quickly; it’s super well-organized and easy to read, without getting caught up in unnecessary details. The descriptions are clear, which keeps the flow going smoothly—perfect if you like a narrative that gets straight to the point.As a tip, I’d suggest adding a bit more emotion to the characters so readers can connect better with what they’re feeling and thinking; it’d make things feel more personal. One more thing: try breaking up some of the longer paragraphs to keep the reading light and easy. With those tweaks, the story and characters will definitely hit closer to home.Hope it helps!
*thumbs-up* for the cover photo.I like the world background, quite unique. The downside (for me) is that I got confused after reading it. I don't know why, maybe I read too much today. Overall, I'll recommend it, for the unique plot.
Congrats on the successful launch of your work! I’ve added it to my collection and started reading. Everything’s going well so far. I’m just a casual reader, so I don’t have much advice to give—I’m just here to enjoy the story!
Author, please work on your grammar and spelling.This novel is actually pretty good, and I also love these types of novels.