My Way Next To You

I really have no clue why you ruined this novel. It was going at a steady, and good pace. The story was good, and interesting, but you just had to ruin it with the NTR yuri…

The thing I hate most is how the MC still acts human even though hes a monster now and has none of the Instincts of one either. Whats the point of the MC turning into a monster when he uses it every 200 or so chapters... I was really hoping he would give into his beast instincts and use it much more often. There is hardly any MC monster novels and the only reason i started reading was someone told me that he abandoned his human form later and became an ancient monster. Once he does become one he reverts back to human... What the hell is the point of him becoming one? this pisses me off. Human fighting other Humans in novels is starting to become so over used. there needs to be more mix ups. The best way to fix this is easy. THIS IS A VAST UNIVERSE BUT EVERYONE IS HUMAN WTF.

To be honest its a nice story in which yun che is replaced by another soul with no harm fone rather then some MCs killing or making his life miserable so it kinda nice

Great book but u need to work more on character discription such as facial colaur of eyes personality behaviour and can u use different coloured or different brackets for each character so asto make it easy to understand.Also I think you can add more mysterious theme, missions, a setof group of friends ,hidden treasuresFriends to mcand suchFrom -A fan of your workYou can look forward to these series to get an idea for further developmentIn another world with a smart phone.

Novel is nice, i like it very much. He takes both china and the rest of the world by storm whit his products. Has quite a lot of face slapping. Only thing i really hate about is, is that MC is a arrogant dickhead who treatds women like toys that has only one purpose, to please him. His now sleeping whit 2 women on same time, and has a third one who hes sending letters to, most likely will sleep whit her to when he finally meets her face to face. That makes it 3 women he sleeps whit at the same time, while one of the women is the one he wants to marry, and he keeps telling her how much he loves her, but moment she turns her back to him, he runs of to **** other women. And btw the other woman he fucks is a underaged (14-15years) girl so kinda a girl (child) and not a woman. And the woman he wants to marry is so god damn perfect, he dosent deserve her at all. I hope she finds out about him cheating on her and dumps him.

"You heard the girl, come on over and treat her before she gets even more spoiled," Hakon grumbled, turning to watch the five men who were still fighting in the courtyard.