The concept in which the novel is revolving around is good. But its good to improve on your Writing as character development and dialogues are getting butchered in between. hope you do well.
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I want to give this a higher rating but its just bad ,too much comedy that there is almost no world building and it's like the MC is so unlikeable that it makes me wanna puke. I respect the author for trying but that's a no for me.
its ok the cooking vibe and the other cooking if you know what i mean ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
To be or not to be this is avadakedrava, but i say expelliarmus maximus or execto patronuuuuum idk kekw lol i've finish the argument, and i'v nedd to write 140 character
Yes, the shameless author had to come and do it, no seriously, give it a try, if you like, you found a new book to keep you entertained, and if you don't...Well, at least you can say you tried :)
One of my favorite novel translation. The translator’s translation skill is amazing and easy to understand when reading this novel. I am waiting to read your daily update.❤️❤️❤️
Basecly, the enviroment in this VRMMO is well made, we know that there is a world with mortal in a culture based on Vikings, and we know for sure that there is a lot of villages and possibly living in different biomes. That, for me, was a interesting idea, because the protagonist in playing a game where he is a god and have to make people follow his religion, praising and praying for him, because he get stronger as he gain more followers. But, the problem is that the author does not focus on this side of the story, the interesting one, he atcually focus on the RPG part of the game with all of the generic things we see in EVERY VRMMO novel, it's kinda desapointing see the author spending more effort in the generic part than in the interesting one where he can work with the mortal's personalitty, culture, world building, other religions, villages, hierarchy in the villages or even in his own religion. When the protagonist leaves the mortal world and go do his RPG stuff (Grinding, Pk, basicly killing people (When one of the most generic little villains like young masters and people with idiotic reason for try PK someone... dude, they still on beta, why someone would possibly try PK other players to get their itens and get stronger when they're gonna lose everything when the game is released?) and monsters, or searching treasures, but i don't know about that part for sure since i didn't even half of the story. I won't stop reading because i am hopeful that the author will make the MC explore further in the mortal world rather than make him interact with a lot of plain and generic characters with 0 importance for the story or the game itself. I think that grinding all the time is stupid since is just a beta, yeah, you will gain more experience fighting the monsters, but wans't the MC a professional player in this kinda of game? Would make more sense see him exploring the world as much as he can so he can find hiding NPC's, treasures, and places and to spread his religion, or even stablish a conexion with the important NPC's from big villages and stuff.
It was so bad worst of the worst LoL
Total and utter DISAPPOINTMENT!!!!!!!!!! That it was to dang fww in chapters!!!!! OMFG hurry and translate more hahahaha. Careful when reading this novel cause it will suck you in like a tornado in the middle of a trailer park hahaha. Great intro amd the flow of the story is also really great. Not much pointless filler. Its like a good movie keeps you dang occupied!!!!! Ended up reading thru the night jezzzz. Anyways super worth it must must read.
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to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror.story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very niceCharacter: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke..updatig stability: I don't know!world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!