"I got hit by a log once and had a hard time remembering things for a while. That's probably what happened to Yan." Uncle Wang Youli saying this with actual gentleness and concern broke me. Here's this girl who just found a fortune on the beach, and these three carpenters—who she's only known for a few days—genuinely worry she's brain-damaged. Not malicious. Not mocking. Just... concerned. That's the kind of warmth this story has been building and it hits different. But the real character moment for me is Sun Jiazhi. The text says she's "feigning sickness to avoid work" and then describes her watching a spider spin its web while thinking about Zeng Yan. "She's truly his child. Once she awakens, she's full of cunning and strategy." That line is everything. Sun Jiazhi recognizes her own reflection in this girl and it unsettles her. She called Zeng Yan "the little girl who had escaped her grasp"—that's not maternal language, that's possessive language from someone who sees people as objects. And then there's Liu Xiuhong, who can't stop worrying and theorizing. She remembers Sun Jiazhi arriving in the village fifteen years ago with that "grand air" and immediately suspects there's an inside story about Zeng Yan's parentage. She's the gossip type but her instincts are sharp. The fact that she and the brigade leader discuss whether to intervene and then decide not to shows how much they respect boundaries while still caring. These side characters are doing so much heavy lifting.
make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate
The story is pretty good so far and I really like the writing style. ngl I cant wait for the next chapter.
One of the best novels where the protagonist is a villain. Unlike most of this type in the app, MC is a true villain who doesn't care about anything or anyone, isn't stupid, and has an excellent understanding of human nature. The story is interesting and intriguing, and the supporting characters are good enough to keep you from getting bored when there's no MC POV. My favorite dynamic is the one between MC and Aristoria, although I will always say that a true villain doesn't have lovers or emotional relationships/friendships.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Shameless author's review.If you like good smut, this is the right story for you. The MC is a pervert who will corrupt families, companies, guilds. His claws will extend to every place. I promise chapters full of smut
Author of Noah’s ‘fantasy novel’ here—So, what can y’all expect? Pros: He’s the villain of the story. I am gonna make his life miserable…push him into the dark side—I will make sure he has no choice but to fulfill his role.Cons: He knows it. He knows that Im after his life.That I will do everything I can to make him the villain in everyone’s story.Noah is going to do everything he can to make sure that he wins~
Good work, the characters are very fun, the fights are well organized but need more chapters and have some hearts and love I want love in the story ?
Dear Author, first I must commend your writing style. Exquisite. And the flow, it is beautiful
I have enjoyed the read so far, especially the genre and the trope being especially, as I have a soft spot for them. Seeing the genre and trope I like being so well written, I couldn't help but give this a five-star review. Even without considering those factors, even if I was new to the genre, it is captivating enough in general to keep most people who give it a try, in my opinion.
"This story deserves 5 stars—not just because I wrote it, but because I poured my soul into every word. Every scene, every twist, every moment of struggle was crafted through endless thought and effort. Cursed Mark: Rise of the Forgotten Prince is more than just a novel—it’s the result of countless hours of refining a world where fate is cruel, power is dangerous, and the cursed refuse to be forgotten."
Shameless Author reviewThis is my first book so their are a lot of things I am improving on and would also like to know what things are there that I can improve on. So I would appreciate any feedback that I get. I am going to try my best to make the world feel as alive as possible with their being reasoning behind every action, the actions not happening just cause they need to for the story.