FallenAngeI
Not great at reviews, but the story is great, i feel that it flows real well, and its such an enjoyaBle read. Feel it deserves five stars and i just hope it gets a solid endIng when its all oVer *hate it when stories are droped* the only bad thing *if u can even call it that* is that i cant binge it cause i wont stop reading It xd
what a great read..
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The writing is decent, the updates seem consistent, story development is alright and there are decent characters. The world building also seems OK. Honestly if you like some what JP-anime vibe story then give it ago.
There is nothing that seems wrong, but the character of the MC and the side characters were rather annoying often. Plus the whole thing about everyone keeping things from him isn't my cup of tea and him not remembering things after major events. Plus the whole chapter of talking to himself about how he will not do something only for him to that exact thing at the end was annoying as well along with half of his self talk.
All in all, if you are a fan of the genre give it a read and decide for yourself, it has its upsides, it wasn't my cup of tea, but it could be yours.
Real Score: 2/5 (Webnovel you need to fix your scoring system!)
Title: "Standard(not), But A Nice Read."
It starts off standard as an isekai into a shoujo romance dating sim prequel like "my next life as a villainess" but with more tradgety. Then it goes off that to some kind of power fantasy where they can make and do just about anything. Then the power fantasy is pulled in by the plot of the isekai worlds story. And it just goes back and forth until the story trips out at the end.
In conclusion, it's ok.
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This is a great novel about MC who was a loser but after he got his power after a accident he became a public sector then promote.This is a story a little Bit of Romance...
Writting grammar is good. Easy to read
Story starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily.
The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out.
Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively.
World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all.
Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average.
Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.
Upon completing the first chapter, I found myself instantly connecting with the protagonist, which may admittedly influence my perspective. The main character reveals that she has been living her life for her mother, which piques my interest in her upcoming character development. I eagerly anticipate witnessing her journey towards making decisions that bring her genuine happiness and personal fulfillment. This engaging narrative promises an insightful exploration of self-discovery and growth.
I really don't understand all the good reviews. This is a good idea done really poorly. Story is rushed, characters are cookie-cutter cliches, and MC becomes OP way to fast. For example - he gets a sword skill, uses his cheat to upgrade it, and then without truly studying the new skill he swings a Tree Branch and slices off a piece of a mountain. I could only get to chapter 17 before I gave up on this mess.
Legitimately decent. 10 chapters are spent before he actually transmigrates though.
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Bro this book is something else the amount of detail put into it is completely mind-blowing, fellow readers do not be discouraged by the current pace of the novel as later I believe it will! become even greater than it is now.I believe this book is worthy of being put in your libraries as I can tell with just 5 chapters the amount of detail and hard work that was put into this book mesmerises me and its use of description, imagery and character interaction creates a very vivid world of my own in my head.I thank the author for granting us such a good read... genres like this I say are not my biggest interests but this has absolutely got me hooked.thank you and goodbye
