Legend_XrDevilRz
I only made it to after the exams part, and I really cannot continue reading. The English is superb…ly horrifying. I could barely understand anything at all.
Read this novel, it's great and deserves your support, so does the author......................Why are you still here when you could be reading Fallen conquerer? Go!
DUMBASS.....make no mistake...this is dope.....so far its dope but why dumbass,,,cause writer is one....I just binged this **** and loved it...but I only found this by luck....who the hell puts a fanfic in MR? wrong genre.....author put it in FF....more people will love this ****............also build romance....keep it happy and fluff....MC must be one man army....god damn lone wolf......keep harem small just no NTR or shallow romance.........**: give MC some BS power to match up against eyes that manipulate reality....also......world travel would be dope
Loved it. As pretty much every other comment has mentioned, it DOES have "The Gamer" webtoon vibes in the beginning, but I'm telling you now, it goes completely off track from The Gamer later on. I mean, COMPLETELY.
Overall it was a very good read, but it's a shame that this is the one and probably the only arc for this novel, as it's been a few months since the last release. I was really looking forward to the next arc, to be honest.
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you
I have read a few chapters.. the storyline progresses quickly.. the author's English is good enough to understand and even use describing words. However, many of those describing words are placed in awkward places of the sentences. I also wish there was more description on everything.. the setting, the characters.. etc. Good luck, author, please continue your hard word and improve your English.
As an author, I think the story has a high chance of becoming popular! To the author, I'd like to know why your updates take so long. If u keep on updating at a slow pace, readers might not be interested in reading your books!
ok so...1.Translation Quality, not the greatest but not bad a lot of mixed up names and also wrong words used in some sentences etc but still better than MTL2. Stability of updates, of updates so far are ok but also not that great and i say that because we get 2 chapters a day which is good but those chapters are 12 hrs apart which might as well feel like 1 chapter a day.3. Story Development, so far story's pacing is pretty good that's all.4. Character Design, the characters in the story so far are good and not as annoying as other stories.5. world background, as of chapter 80 not much is known of the world we know of very few locations and those are only briefly mentioned. 6. as for why i gave this novel a 1 star is to more effect the overall value that it currently has, we got people just throwing out 5 stars without actualling judging the novel etc so i think people need to throw out 1 stars to counter said people that think everything is gold
Funny.MC is sent to another world where he becomes a famous scholar. When he finds out about cultivators he ditches his scholarly stuff and does his best to join a sect.Unfortunately he fails to join any sect, except the most run-down and impoverished one. The story revolves around the MC being super talented in comprehension (so far) while thinking that the members of the sect are mysterious experts. However in reality, MC was needed to meet a certain member-quota to make this sect an official sect, so the members of this sect do everything to keep him in. They pretend to act like experts to MC, and MC admires them, it's pretty funny and so far a good read.
This novel is eppy sauce. But in all seriousness, it has a good plot development and begins with a character with lots of drive. Hopefully this evolves into a even more wonderful story.
its liked reading teletubies in a novel. what i mean is, the novel wrote just base on around 2 metter radius bubble of the mc. What worse is that the story jump all over the places. The story doesnt has any goal whatsover, there no solid foundation in world building, the character are all there just create platform for the mc to perform,but then again our mc just THERE, he just doesnt has any reason to exist in that story really....its bassicaly slice of life but with power building story just so that he doesnt get killed. The story is really blurry, only the mc is slightly not,then again the mc still vague because the story is just all over the place. Ch 1 he brave the danger and survive, 5 chapter then the mc suddenly becoming a super inteligent and bravest knight there is. What he got after 3 years skip of training doesnt even got any explaination....is he sword user? is he magic user? how good he is with close combat? how good is he with intelectual thinking? the story just progress as if telling you, "Yo mate, this is the mc, he's talented and he is THE MC, after hes training for 3 year any problem that come hes way is solveble and he is THE MC, oh yeah and the scene where he is fighting, the close call scene, the intelectual connan scene, and the scheming unveil scene is just to make it more dramatic, he is THE MC so of course you dont need to know how good he is compare to other, he just there and any problem solve."
