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Author never finish his novel. He always drops them midway. Author is a scam.
Authors Recipe:
1. Find good & popular korean novel
2. Copy korean novel plots & ideas but add a little bit of your own original ideas
3. Continue getting plots & ideas frim other novels
4. When running out of ideas to copy drop the novel midway
Despite it having many flaws, I enjoyed reading this novel, mainly because I learned the hard way that when reading a webnovel I should mostly turn my brain off...
Anyway, let's get started on listing what I didn't like, since that's usually what I'm looking for in reviews.
There are slight inconsistencies with main character's personality. Sometimes he's curious, sometimes he's not. Author seems to think that having limited curiosity is a strong point and insists that mc must be like that, which you know I'm not really against that, cuz it's his story, he can have his own views and can talk about them however he wants. But, whenever plot needs to move forward the curiosity somehow appears! Ta-da! It's like magic.
As with any novel written for commercial purposes, it's full of cliches, this shouldn't come off as too much of a surprise at this point. There's nothing wrong with cliches, what's important is how it's used, but of course you can't expect much from a webnovel (once again). The cliche I'm talking about isn't the system or anything which has been elaborated on countless times, for some reason I've not noticed people talking about this much, it's when mc gets a new tool or ability and it miraculously comes in handy, for some god forsaken reason it's somehow just what he needed. But at least he doesn't get everything served to him on a silver platter, he still hasn't gotten the english skill he desperately needed but considering it has turned into his only weakness by now, I suspect it was kept to make mc not seem too op, while at the same time get a reason to make some jokes. The comedy is above average in this novel imo, it's not really good but isn't meh.
The relationship with female characters seems weird. It smells of harem, but it also feels like max author will do is write suggestive things, I'd prefer if there's no romance altogether.
Author randomly deducts mc's IQ for the sake of comedy, while at other times he becomes a straight A student.
Police doesn't exist in this world, as far as I've noticed. A guy gets repeatedly beaten up over the span of approximately over a week, but doesn't report mc to the police. Possible explanations I can think of is not wanting to be known as a snitch, no one wanting to testify bcs he's a gangster (but his friends got beaten up together with him, plus since he's a gangster he could use threats), not wanting to lose face (but the whole neighborhood knows about it), or it could just be a plot convenience. I wonder which one is it?
well if you are a guy dont bother reading this MC is genuine man-child, asshole and a big cunt. he will rub you off in very bad way. He reincarnated but doesnt care about such miraculous second chance instead hung up about his failed relationship.
sneers and snorts are all over the place, Thinks of himself very highly but is Killed by baby zombie and he is the person who should be dead if not for system instead he is such a cuck to system. very arrogant Young master but without any backing or power. So, MC is very very stupid with negative EQ and someone whom you will find in every cultivation novel as a young master who gets stomped by mc for his arrogance.
As for girls this is your dream guy so read it.
Is this another Huxia is the best, Huxia willl conquer the world trope? I am already tired of those themes which is totally unbearable. This is my opinion when i see the chapter 1.
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This novel is pretty good.
Author, kindly consider writing a part 2 for this novel.
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Lmao they deleted my review because it was a bad review criticizing their novel selection system!!!
Feel bad for this book getting hate and all but deleting every bad review doesn't help the image of this book or the damn company!!!
Around chapter 20 and after, Author leaves out a lot of information. The story becomes really confusing.
For example, the main character, became a totally different person from chapter 19 to 20(not sure what chapter it was). I feel you did this to rush the story. As you made him into a super motivated individual that is now doing his best from a normal individual. You abandoned all the character development you had on him in the previous chapters.
This story is a good one, probably going to continue read. However I probably will taking my leave soon if characters development is abandoned again.
Ten thousand years my ass!
He lives that long time only to become a nerd gigolo, wth is this, the whole story about a cheap gang war, if u want to kill ur brain cells, don't read this. Even 40 y.o man wiser than him.
I guess I'll commend the author for he only cares for his reader's opinion about the book and doesn't even care for the money. I respect you dude. And your novels grear by the way, with just the right amount of pacing and I love that its not harem, hehehe well good luck on your novel man.
The premise of the story is cool. The characters have potential. But it an in coherrent mess which seems to be a first draft. I wouldn't recommend it. I hope that the author keeps going and gets better. They seem to have potential.
Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.