As the author, I'm doing everything in my power to make this a five-star story! Here's to many Onion Knight-filled adventures across a fantastical and totally-not-horrific-and-existentially-crippling MMO world.
100 chapters in at the time of this review. This book is elite, highly recommend it to any prospective readers. the author has crafted a world that draws you in. Everything from the mc to the side characters and the world itself is attractive. No real major flaws this book will be receiving my stones and tickets.
A tale with an interesting premise: If you never give up hope, you're likely to find a way to solve your problems.
The writing is solid. With good character and world development delivered at a steady pace.
The foreshadowing hints at exciting events in the not to distant future.
Can hardly wait to read more!
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Is this being dropped because it's jus getting good.
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Please continue these and I accidentaly wrote my review on chapter 1. I know it has been a year since a new chapter and it was stop becuase you had a family emergency but please continue this novel. I sent a power stone and if you continue I’ll send more. please.
*ahem* Fellow daoist it's Swordfane, not profane but the thought it appreciated! I finally have more free time so the novel speed will ramp up. I plan to finish a volume every month and complete the story in 2-3 months. Thank you for giving it a chance!
Writing quality is pretty good. The story is set well with good world background, and the charactar is introduced really well. This is a pretty good read and a well needed twist on gates and dungeons, if you will. It finally changes the trope on what they are
The great setting I read up to the latest chapter and the grammar was good and the synopsis elaborates on what is to be expected on theis story. Overall great story❤
The mc is pathetic has no self respect kneels and knowtows to others easily even having no fault .Author i dare you to delete this review
Mediocre novel.
It's better to create average potential ability, rather than op potential ability that being used like sh*t. It's really frustrating to read.
And finally the MC, he is a passive doll that couldn't think on his own. There's no urgency, no initiative, even in front of obvious information, he needs other to remind him what need to do. So frustrating.
I am barely able to force my self to read about 180 chaps before finally give up.