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from what I've read it's okay but for me the chapter are not enough for me to give a full judgments ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
its quite amusing to read this and can relieve stress.Okay Keep up the good Work and the please update.????????????????????
can someone give me the name of the raw? And interesting concept..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,...,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,
There's only one or two novels with this plot here in Webnovel. I wish it would get picked! And besides unlike the other one, this one doesn't have portals or the likes (hopefully) instead it's in a modern, normal(?) world.
A very misogynist author. Don't need to say anything else. .
I've always been a sucker for cultivation novels and this one, so far, has quite an interesting premise. Although the synopsis is vague and didn't give much info about the story, it was captivating enough, especially the opening sentence.
Writing quality is good. There are some mistakes but it didn't disturb my reading experience. One thing I really like about the writer's way of writing is his simple words that flows so well. His way of storytelling is comfortable in the eyes and easy to understand.
For the story developement, the pace is quite slow in my opinion but fortunately, the plot has started to reveal itself in the latest chapter, which is ch 8. There's a little plot twist in the last ch, which I find quite surprising and entertaining, making me have the urge to read more. I'll be looking forward for your next chapter so good luck, Author!
For the world background, can't judge much as it was still in its early chapter but overall, it's quite okay. We get to be introduced a bit about the world, the realms it has, and the background of mc's family.
As for the character development, the story, despite being a 3rd pov, is written in the view of the mc. His thoughts and emotions are fully exposed to the reader which I thought is a good and efficient way to make readers feel closer to the mc. And the story background of Fang Yan, which I assume will be the main villain of the book, has been introduced quite early. So for the character development, I think the author has done a fairly good job in this aspect.
Well, that's the end of my review. Hope that this will help attract readers for you, Author! I've run out of ps for today but I'll make sure to give you some tomorrow! Thanks for the wonderful story! Keep up the good work!
Nice to meet you! I love writing this book currently. And I hope you enjoy reading it!
It will be a VRMMORPG game with cultivation elements and some lewd handholding. Don't read if you're not into that.
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this sounds so interesting!! i need to read this!!
this is the great novel actually,hope you can continue write this novel brother
I have no clue what I'm reading 90% of the time. you seem to be trying so hard to make this seem like an original story.... but it's a fan fic, simple as that, so making it so confusing and convoluted. no need for some overly complex grand design. 22 chapters in and the story has barley anything to do with douluo. of your going to make a douluo fanfic then do that. this isn't your original world stop making it so complex as if this was an original story. ruins the whole purpose of it being a fanfic. otherwise take out the douluo stuff, and make an original world and sick with it, or get rid of the weird af system and multiple reincarnators and trial candidates or what ever the heck is going on here. it just doesn't work. fanfics are ment to use original works and twist it around, while your trying to make an original work and add other non original stuff into it.