I enjoyed the first 60 chapters, but the author really dropped the ball afterwards.
I’ve been reading the MTL (at around c.250) and its literally the same plot over and over.
The MC sends out people to do some task and right before they can complete it they are overwhelmed by the enemy and the MC has to expand the territory to save them with his avatar.
Rinse repeat. Nothing is ever accomplished by his subordinates without help from the MC who saves them every time. It’s literally all the plot ever is.
MC is about to have enough experience to upgrade his territory? You know there will be some fight that happens right as he upgrades which coincidentally includes everyone within his territory so that he can save them.
Also, the upgrading has essentially no effect on the novel other than adding another wall that isnt even used. No additional systems, no changes to the story.
Utter disappointment of a novel.
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Sooo... How do I say this...
I f*ucking love this!
It's pure comedy gold (mostly incredibly stupid humor, but that's exactly what makes it this good!).
To be fair it's a bit wobbly in the beginning but don't mind that, besides somehow it works even tho the story doesn't explain to much (I recommend reading the author notes and the authors comments, there's some worldbackgroud info in there, maybe the author could compose one or two auxiliary chapters for those Infos?).
But the worldbackgroud, powerscaling etc. Isn't really that important because this book is a lot like the anime 'konosuba'. In the sense the the characters and their interactions are in the foreground, and the humor. Then again it is a lot darker than konosuba.
I still haven't completely made up my mind about this but I very much enjoy reading this story!
So keep up the good work author!
And to everyone else, I hope I could help you get a better picture of the novel with my ramblings.
Sorry for any messed up english, not my first language.
Yours sincerely
Korriberg
Author here. I dont know how often i can update. I am working a lot not including the holidays. But so far i am Enjoying the work of my story and i hope you guys enjoy as well. Thank you for the support.
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Remove character names and you will see the cookie cutter blandness for what it is. Honestly there is nothing special in this novel that any veteran has seen this premise done better anywhere else. Sad to see I wasted my time reading this again only to see an old comment of mines detailing how bland it is. Hopefully this review stays up.
Good story with great world building. I really like MC, his character, behavior and decisions.
After that podcast? How the hell can I not!
This was just,, hilarious.
Thank you. Read This!
Super Entertaining. I'm waiting for the scene for when mc wishes for unlimited chips with cat girl delivery
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Why dont you update its been three months if you can't Update for some reason just tell us the chapters are not even that long if youre not gonna update then jus delete this story(I gave it low stars for abother reson)