billions of transistors mmmm okay IBM mmm okay 40T memory impressive but not that wow in 2022 anyway this looks just too unique let's see hhh
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
this was not executed well. The story has way too many pov's. it's horrendous it starts to put me to sleep and can't focus. I made it to ch 16 and couldn't stand the grammer anymore.
Roses are red, Violets are blue, If you like this then I wish you get c_cked too........................................................................................
I am giving 2 star for this novel. But it's not worth 2 star. There lies so many problem with this novel.
First no suitable name for MC Everytime calling him little guy.
Second story development is so bad
Third no thirll , excitement , emotion in this novel.
So I drop this novel.
How to say it?
Redo of Heler in Zombie Apocalypse.
With generic r*** MC.
This is story it´s badly writen, and it´s a problem of the author not of the translator. Not a problem with the plot but there are a few of things that make me drop this in the third chapter:
-In the first chapter the author JUSTIFIES the narrator, and he did it quite badly.
-The narrator voice, the MC, wow... it is really anoying, and it´s not believable thats not the voice of a seven years old.
-THE SPOILERS, the author just throw a lot of sopilers inside his story.
The writing is good, the updates are consistent, the story development seems solid, the characters are original, and the background seems to be well thought out. Still, I'd enjoy seeing a bit more focus on the description of the setting and what the characters look like.
To the author: Feel free to check out my original Avatar The Last Airbender spinoff "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you would like.
Its just amazing and also the story development is perfect . The author deserve the 5 stars , the more you read it you will get curious about what will happen next ....KEEP it up!!!
Great writing,great story writing,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Like it very much! Interesting plot and a nice writing style!
Keep up the good work and please give us some more updates ;)
My ** are yours! <3
it's quite good, one of my best here actually