seems nice bit im guessing its an uke protagonist. how boring, just as people are obsessed with harems they are also obsessed with writing uke mc's
I Love the Novel.
It is well written and highly amusing to read.
your interest in the novel keeps getting renewed every or every few chapters.
The only dissapointing thing is that i wish there was more chapters updated, i can't wait to read more.
MC doesn’t face slap characters, characters face slap themselves. Growing his beasts? He rather buys it! This novel doesn’t follow the usual routine. It’s not cliche at all. I love this. It's been a very satisfying read.
Flaw: There is no exact closure to Arcs or Characters. Nothing conclusive. Just expect slow development. But I really love the Comedy-Style.
Such a shame, the book started out as having great potential and the world building and character development was good, everything was great apart from the cardboard cutout stereotypes that were the characters and the fact that the MC never really fought until it got really annoying for the readers, and then the author just stopped updating. I looked at his profile and I think the last time he was on the website was like a month ago or something? What a waste of potential and such a big cliffhanger.
Really hope it's a good read
REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean)
Probably one of the most disappointing Main characters in WN's history. I read until the end but I can't understand MC's character. Sometimes I wondered I read different stories.
Too much cockblocking. Author's writing style very difficult to read at first . I am not telling about Grammar but about his style. He used a lot of ' jokes that are not funny '. Most of the tags are misleading and I am going to drop them because this is not my cup of tea.
Read the summary, expected a disappointment and was surprised to get a worthwhile story.
The gaming ring is actually not the most OP thing the MC optains in the first few chapters, but I won't spoil.
The characters of the MCs brother and sister are alright, not really important but still nice to have. The rest of the people are generic so far.
It is a classic Cultivation novel with a few twists which keep it interesting.
Not much is known about the world and the game world has more interesting characters which is kind of a shame, but the author is not really talented at writing action scenes which rarely happen in this kind of novel.
Give it a try
This translation is worse than the other groups translation.
Please leave this one alone. There is nothing worse than a reduction in translation quality.
what the f is happen
This novel is, if not the best, one of the many good ones that I have read. The way the story progresses has a nice pace. I also like how each characters interacts with each other and how the world-building is being portrayed.
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,
don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,
make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,
don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.
if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.