This book has gotten me hooked . I just hope the author would update more quickly.
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A good novel with a well thought yet rush plot. However with the speed of the uploads, it doesn't seem all that rush. Needless to say, despite the slow updates, the story wonderfully written with an engaging plot for each story line. Though it may be too early to tell, what I've seen so far it great. Good luck tp you author and thank you for writing such an entertaining story!!!
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So far ''PLOT" is really good I joined hope you maintain the quality as novel progress.
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Dear author, I just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed reading your web novel so far. Your world-building is absolutely fantastic,I can't wait to see where the story goes from here! Thank you for sharing your talent with us, and please keep up the great work.
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My first read in the world of Webnovel and I enjoy it A LOT. Fast paced sometimes, slow paced sometimes, a lot of romance, drama, conflicts, wars, a very complete story. The best and the worst part of the novel to me is the protagonist, Berengar is a excelent representation of the human being when they gain power, how they show their true nature. He is a extremely hypocrite guy, or the type of protagonist who their feelings and actions are dictated for his convenience and autor convenience. Cruel with his enemies but loving with his loved ones but at the same type so fking selfish that sometimes he don't give a fk about his loved ones and take decisions and does things that hurt them deeply and in any ferfetched way throw them the guilt. A sentence that my grandma says a lot represent him very well: The dead man is scared of the slaugthered man. The definition of hypocrisy. But hey don't misunderstand me, this not make the novel less great, just is something that maybe not much readers like.
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The mc dies and finds himself reborn in another world with a golden finger which allows him to master skills, however the system only recognizes certain actions, after many years have past and he barely is stronger then a regular human because he feels the hidden powers would find him if he reveals himself, he finally gain another golden finger the power to sleep and send his soul into the multiverse and take overvthe bodies of the recently deceased to gain new skills, free from his worries he openly reveals his powers in the dream soul world's, gaining many skills and powers.
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The story is set in Poland during medieval times, with the MC reborn from a modern gamer playing the game, to a novel coming from an illustrious background. He's respected but he's middle-lower echelon in terms of nobility.
He knows a bit about this part of history, yet what truly gives him the foundation to stand out and develop is that he knows one simple fact about their current king, which is that he will abandon his kingdom and flee in 4-5 months time.
This isn't something that by itself will make him rich and powerful, but it gives him the opportunity to take advantage of that fact. The way he's growing his influence, wealth and power is by making innovations and improvements to already existing things.
For example, his beer business is doing really well, and he has expanded to 3 territories 112 chapters into the story, (all 3 of which are his, haha). His beer is considered to be on a different level, and knowing this he made it famous by using a couple of opportunities to make governors and nobles try it during noble social events in order to spread it.
There's no ridiculous cheats, he doesn't get thousands of gold of income after a couple of chapters, hell even after 112 chapters that's still not the case.
While from what I've said so far you might think that the MC's just good for making money, that's not the case. Funding an army is not so easily done, especially when your territory doesn't make enough money a month to open up a solid business.
There are also the issues of manpower, which can't be solved in a short period of time by regular means, which means he needs territory if he wants more population fast.
I can go on and on, but basically, him focusing on economic development so far is mostly because he needs it as a foundation to grow further.
The main point that has attracted me to this story, is that the MC isn't a knight in shining armor that will risk his life for nothing. He's neutral, which i can deal with.
The main issue I have with it however, is that while he kills most of his enemies, I don't find him ruthless enough. *Spoiler below this*
Most recently, he defeated the man that wanted to take his wife as his own in a war in which he killed almost all of the enemies soldiers, and after the man stands on trial and is exiled, he doesn't off him after he's exiled. Yes he's already gotten all of his territory and money, but offing him is no problem and I don't see a good reason for him not to do it. Some smart nobles would know it was him that made his enemy mysteriously disappear, but so what? It's not uncommon and there won't be proof.
So far the author has shown that he doesn't use tropes, but if the exiled guy with nothing to his name makes problems for the MC in the future, that's grounds for dropping the book.
Overall it's a great novel, among the best of its rare kind. Novels similar to this are Black Iron's Glory, The World Online, etc.
This is the worst rubbish I've read on this site, the only thing worse than a bad story is a good one ruined by st*pidity, this story could have been so much better, but the author just had to try and turn it to some kind of joke. It's disgusting