To start I think this book has a lot of potential, with a great mc and background that gives the story a great fundamental that could see it being at the top of the power rankings for many weeks when it breaks through.Unfortunately the writing let’s down an otherwise great story, the high use of exclamation marks are mildly cringy and childlike, and the “story for another day” does nothing more than break immersion and cause annoyance. If I wanted a story for another day I’d just wait to read the chapter, the fact I’m reading the chapter means i want a story now! See right way to use an exclamation mark. I understand giving the readers things to wonder about to keep them reading but there’s much better methods. I hope these problems become fixed in later chapters (only about 50 in so far) but if they are I can see this novel really becoming popular. Would love to work on this novel as an editor to be honest!
This is a crappy novel no matter how you try to spin it. The logic of the author is simply retarded. The MC is simply a hypocritical POS! He goes around raping and stealing any woman he wants regardless of whether or not she is married then tries to act like what he is doing is right. At one point in the story he forces 12 Light Priestess who were members of his empire to change their affiliation to a Dark God. They do not want to so because they have been dedicated to their faith since they were children and want to remain faithful. The MC tells them if they do not do so willingly he will force them into prostitution or force them to kill their family members if they do not do so. Some try to kill themselves and instead he ends doing to usual rape converting them to the Dark. He is always saying how once someone is a member of his Empire they will live great lives and they will be his people but, in the end he just turns out to be a POS who will abuse his own people. At another point in the story he sees some Tauren about to rape his brothers wife and he finds it disgusting so he intervenes and injures the Tauren only for him to go and rape the woman himself. Ya, that's the type of retarded logic the author keeps putting out and he wants people to see the MC as the so called hero lol He gets enraged over and over at the actions of his enemies when he himself is carrying out the same actions or even worse but, because it's the MC the author thinks people are stupid enough to just turn a blind eye to the blatant hypocrisy! For the first 600+ chapters its pretty obvious that the author is a virgin who has no idea what it's like to be with a woman. After that he just starts writing to live out his personal NTR Fantasies. It's the same damn plot over and over and the next 1000+ chapters after that. The only thing that changes is the location and names. Why Chinese idiots paid for this is beyond me. Around 1300 Things go to **** and fast! The story then completely shifts away from the main story so that for over 300+ chapters the MC going can go Tribe from Tribe of different animal species yet, do the same damn thing every chapter. He arrives, taunts the leader, beats him and screws their wives/relatives. If you can name an animal then there was a chapter where the MC went to that animal tribe and raped it's women. What makes it even more hysterical is he gets enraged and disgusted when he sees some men and woman having an orgy and of course kills them and takes the women. I actually find myself wishing someone would kidnap and screw some of his wives to give him a little Karma
Raws below: jekievdkdisvksurbkdhrJdbdbuehvdnhdbdjbduieorhuhsjoeoqhdlpidhhdjdnvdnskshvebdbbsuxhvsvwccaqjeihdhsejebevjs had ver dvvsvdhhdvdgdh
it is a great work and I have been waiting for more chapters author please don't keep us waiting for too long. please give us some chapter to read.
To start the review off, I will say that this the same author who wrote "Strongest Abandoned Son
Someone walk on sidewalk : Everyone was so surprised they felt like dyingSomeone eats food WITH SPOON : Why you do dat i am so surprised my jaws fallSomeone shoots GUN at ENEMIES and BULLET EXPLODES : Jaws drop, wow, such wow, surprised as **** yoThis is the comedy in this novel. Everytime anyone does anything everyone else feels like fainting or gets flabbergasted.Also racist novel, they called taiwan a provnice in chapter 2
One of the absolute good novels under pets and cultivation. A good novel that has a very good humor side and best of all no Romance as of the latest raws (~500). If there is one thing that is wrong with this novel is that it's getting translated by Web Novel. These a**h**** have been cutting a single raw chapter into 4 or 5 translated chapters. This trend can be seen by the later chapters. This makes the chapters so small, content with many cliffhangers and doesn't even make sense how the chapter ended in some cases.Worst of all for people who were using Fast Pass Web Novel has f***ed you over.
Same as the other stupid novels....same background and same ****ty villains...I totally get a headache reading this type of novel...I mean if you are reader of many Chinese books u can understand what i mean..MC jumps into all the ****ty plots directly if he sees some random street brawl regarding alchemy and gets humiliated like.."Get lost boy we are discussing alchemy and not to drink milk" and MC will brawl with them about alchemy"authors main way of filler" and the people will prostrate before him asking his repentance for the wrong and to teach them alchemy.....same ****tttt everywhere..arhhhhhh
Honestly, I am really annoyed. A really good idea with lots of potential wasted by braindead author and by extension, braindead mc. Mc truly “loves” his girlfriend, yes he “loves” her so much that he didn’t even bother searching how to cure her with his omniscient system that can he can search anything up with. No, all he thinks about is creating “perfect accidents” so as to get revenge. What a waste of potential.
this novel may be good but this synopsis doesn't interest me in anything less maybe the spirit soul concept that i believe is similar to douluo dalu ...
Someone left a one star review, so I'm here to balance it out. It's a good novel to read and chill. The storyline is good, the Mc is overpowered, the girls are awesome! Personally, I like Yushu the most, her antics <3Good job and f*** those 7000 chapters, I'll support you until the end of this novel!!
This is entertaining to read... but wow... one of the dumbest novels I have ever read. The "overpowered but wants to live a normal life" gets super old after a few chapters.