prashant_dasari
His crush to sleep with him? Aight amm head out??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Cliché af. Plot armor is very obvious as he gets things right when he needs it. To me the world building isn't realistic at all, imagine if there were a group of people you thought less of gaining higher status and power like if there were African aristocrats in the 1700s. It is painfully obvious that there won't be much setbacks for mc and he would just continue getting more op without much work.
Yi Yun will always have a place in my heart. One of the most memorable characters I've seen. Reading his adventures always brings a smile to my face.Thank you CKTalon and Cocooned Cow for bringing us this great novel!
Good story..........????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The number of angry 80-year-olds is much lower than the number of angry under 30-year-olds.In all theory, a 418-year-old should be a very patient person.Likewise, if you spend 400 years in "hell" and you lean on something that you don't have, and which gradually becomes a mirage, a distant memory (Like a family) you become crazy to a fairly high speed.I always thought that the novel where the goal of the mc was something passive (here "to protect his family") the novel could only be boring.Just watch all the best anime, imagine if naruto didn't want to be Hokage, if Gon (HxH) didn't want to find his father, if Songoku didn't want to fight powerful opponents, if Light didn't want to kill all the criminals...A goal is at least half of a character, if he doesn't have one then it's a half empty character.In short, let's talk more concrete, the main character could be interesting if he had the will to do something.The world is basic and nothing special.The secondary characters are at least as boring as the protagonist.the writing quality is rather good if we forget the fact that the author does not proofread.the rhythm of the chapters is good.
Raw or chinese name for this novel?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Too much cringe, too much formal words. Not my cup of tea ☕.
love the new concept of being a plant. very refreshing also it would help if any of you guys can give me advice on novels like this were mc turns into an animal, insect or fish or plant. really (pretty much anything where mc can turn into something or reincarnated as something)Also MORE UPDATES
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
A 100+ chapters and mc was still in 1st cultivation realm, most of the chapters was wasted because of unnecessary and repetitive information like how does body will achieve something like that, how can I control my internal breathing more freely yada yada, author focusing on word count literally destroyed this story haiist
Maybe I do not know how to count but I'm not posting 5 chapters a week, being 2 or 3...T-TPls more ;-;........................................................
Grammar, mostly prepositions need improvingSide characters are always watching the MCNobles are more rottenInteresting novel...=------------
