prashant_dasari
absolutely amazing Character development ✨ world building ✨ story pace ✨
Hi Author!! I love your boom ??I guess im everywhere hehe ?So i def love your story line it nice, and ypu potray each emotions quite well!! A quick advice, when a character is talking could you use this a quotation mark, i got confused ?Just like this “Hi im alice” she said Use this so we wont get confused Keep up the good work
just here to review for a fastoass event
its good to read, i love the phasing of each event, the character of the story is really exciting, i want to read more, i wish more chapter please
top tier novel just fix translation mistakes
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this story/novel is interesting and has a lot of potential..I myself am facinated with the idea of modern weapons vs cultivation bullshit but the reason why writing quality is 2 star is because of so many grammatical errors(which can improve)I can understand that maybe this is your first book and English is not your second language but the amount of grammatical errors here are so many...Overall it's a great read you just gotta improve your grammar...
way too expensive to read who can afford £80 to read a book?
Obligatory author review. I know the story might be a bit slow starting, but I'm hoping to tell the story of our protagonists going through the change of the world as it happens, instead of starting off in a freshly formed modern fantasy world. Enjoy
Absolutely amazing....I love the mc unlike all the beta characters in reincarnation novel this mc is smart and always in control, and the whole gaming god plot is also so unique.... author please continue writing
If you ever wanted to continue this, wnmtl.org has a good machine translation of this book, It just has a few incorrect terms n misgenders the mc a lil bit
I like you author but you need to learn that having a 50ch of drivel and useless mc is not okBefore around ch 48 the story was absolute trash and just skimming is good enough cause nothing of value is there at all, the only thing you could get from that is that mc is a ***** and fucking stupid yet he can endure alotThat's it....
