The comedic and cute elements in this story is an added bonus and definitely brings out the charm and sense of humor of the characters, especially Analissa! Girl definitely does not have her priorities straight.
Just doing this for exp.
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Currently in Chapter 21, I'm enjoying the novel, but the translation says it's 14 chapter weekly, but I only see 1 a day, sometimes none!
It discourages
Good book.
Let's make it official guys. Wanna see more chapters and the character's progress with the book of knowledge and the other worlds power's and god's
So it’s that time again I have been force- ahem persuaded to once again drag myself out of my cave and review a story. I would like to say this is based on my opinion so take what I say with a grain of salt.
Writing quality- for me five stars it’s clean I didn’t notice any errors that hampered my reading and no spelling mistakes were particularly noticed.
Stability of updates- again five stars i would give it more if I could since this is the authors second novel which he is updating with his first.
Story development- I gave this category four stars this is mostly due to lack of chapters since ideas differ vastly from execution though I will fully admit I like the presented idea of the novel and it’s current progression hence the four stars.
Character design- for me it’s five stars I will say I’m not picky. I don’t even need a design for characters to work in my head, but I know some people are rather particular with getting an image so I encourage you to read it and see if it works for you or not.
World building- for this I gave it four stars like story development there just isn’t enough for me to say it is amazing though it is brilliantly mysterious and so far consistent though this might change in the future though I hope it doesn’t.
Now with Webnovels categories out of the way it’s time for my thoughts and opinions that didn’t seem to fit in any of them.
First whilst I’ve said some very nice things about this novel there are some things that bugs me indefinitely that I can’t gloss over like some other choices.
The major gripe I have and that’s the author tells a lot to the readers there is little to no inferring of character traits and characteristics of the cast since it’s told straight up with out any subtly. Which I found personally annoying especially when it’s repeated. Though it doesn’t detract from the story. I also so understand that it could just be a style choice and I’m just not clicking with it particularly.
Another thing that is related to the a fore mentioned point is that we are told about character moments and that could be fun and show off the characters of Leo and Morganna especially they get shoved to the side with a couple lines of exposition whilst I suspect that this is due to the author wanting a certain pacing of the novel it still feels like a waste of potential of exploring the characters.
Right onto something else that I have a slight distaste for character bipolar disorder whilst a lot of the characters are great they are fun to read about as they explore the new world.
There is one character that I don’t sit well with and that’s the main character Leo himself aside from the authors Infamous brand of naming (curse you Cruz) the thing i am against is how he shifts seemingly out of nowhere at first he’s introduced as a self proclaimed bastard of a person he isn’t Voldemort evil but he happily sells away the souls of gamers for the chance of resurrection. The only problem I have with this is that he seems to care too much by the people that jump into his game. There isn’t an arc where he learns the benefits of being nice to people he just seems to suddenly care about the players which In my eyes doesn’t fit his established character of being unscrupulous to achieve his dream. I don’t know maybe it’s just me.
In conclusion it’s a very fresh story exploring something mystical with a very fun cast of characters. It’s something I would recommend if you enjoy a more mysterious style with a system that is different to the usual whilst I am at odds with something’s in this novel it doesn’t detract from an entertaining read plus my name makes a cameo so there’s that.
Now hopefully the author will remove the gun from my head.
Pretty please.
It's a nice story and we'll written. It will be nice if they can update it more frequently and it's worth reading. It's nice to kill your time.
Don’t take this novel seriously very good novel, read all chapters want more. Unlock them already bros please please many characters in my review ok.
A must read if you've read quite a few xianxia. This one's a really like reeeeeeeeally good parody/comedy!!!....................................................
This story had potential, but bad execution. MC is a "white knight" but with so many plot armor, it got boring after a while.
No updates for a long time, no translator anymore.
It's really cool. I'm actually excited to see more bloodlines and evolutions. Please no harem or at least make it so they have sense. Each individual is unique and while it's not impossible, it's very hard to imagine people being comfortable with sharing.
The story line is very interesting and thriller. The way the author explains the story is very detail and make readers comfortable with her plot.
Ok I just got to say does anyone else find it ironic that the god of faith betrayed him ummmm.