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this is a great story so far, I love where this is going. the writting is good love how you intigrated Bruce Wayne's character into the story. although, how are you going to do his background as you know SHEILD is going to run so many checks on him.
Humans are biological creatures, so calling a human biohuman is kinda redundant.......word count word count word count word count word count
This book was surprisingly good. I thought that since it was about farming it may get boring but both the MC and the side characters are well written as is the story
This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.
I really enjoyed this novel i hope more chapters are added. The way that the hero is portrayed is supeeeeeeeeeeeeeer coooooooooooooooooolllllllllllll
Writing Quality - Top notch.Update - So far, so good. Although it relatively new.Story Development - Excellent so far.Character - Well written and designed.World Background - The layout is great so far.Keep up the good work.
Why was this book not picked up again it has so many votes ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
While there is world building at the start, the introduction of Xing Tian as the ‘Asian girl’ is a bit disconnected in the first two chapters. It is systematically written and there is a lot of hard work done on the novel. The novel probably belongs to the cyberpunk genre . Just a personal opinion on my part, it is a nuance but each new character generation tend to be a little choppy at the start. This choppiness isn’t a grammatical issue but rather how the content flows. Fight/combat scenes while described, requires more action, shorter description to give it an ‘action’ feel. However it is my personal preference. Others may prefer in depth descriptions. Overall, nice work!
Hello everyone, I really hope you enjoy reading Author of Life. This is a really fun slice-of-life story about a boy named Thomas and his experiences as a literal god. This story is incredibly fun to write so I hope you enjoy it and can provide feedback. Thank you.
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Pretty good!
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Wow, the synopsis is really interesting. The story has a lot of potential and judging from the first few chapters, I can tell that it's going to be a long and interesting ride .Keep up the good work [img=recommend]
