The shameless pervert is honest.
The writing quality is a 3.5/5 for me. The author uses “my” when “mine” should be used. “She is mine” or “she will be mine” not “she is my.” The sentences sometimes are missing words and definite/indefinite articles.
There’s a steady updating, so 5/5!
The story creeps up like a man in yobai but premature *ahem* ruins it sometimes. 4/5, the immaturity and virgin part is essential to the story, but it’s not my cup of tea.
3.5/5 for characters as I don’t understand how his perversions are indulged by other characters, but then again, what do I know?
3/5 for world building. It’s pretty generic to me, but if you think otherwise, write your own d*mn review!
Throughly enjoyed it. Its op protag with creation powers that has really good world building. Author did a really good job with overall concept and probably better than legendary mechanic. The grammar is decent but the updates are sporadic so I guess just binge it once in a while
I don't understand the point of making him a transmigrated hero, who before transmitting fully had to spend hundreds of thousands of years observing the world, if your going to make his past knowledge completely useless. He has proven to be unreliable and useless when it came to any type of information throughout the entirety of the chapters I read.
The main character, having past acclamations as being a world observing hundreds of thousands year old entity, as well as an accomplished hero, is written in a way that makes him feel ordinary and not special in any regards.
The story is written in such a way that it brings no emotions from the reader. I can't exactly pin point the exact reasons why, but I have managed to get a basic generalization an this is. First, the bland descriptions of actions,places, and things. Serves to make the story take a very one note plot.
Secondly, the lack of character descriptions when it comes to the characters emotions and actions makes the story even more monotonous. Couple this reason with the first then you've got a very bland story that doesn't manifest any good emotions when reading it.
Oh and I read the first 60 chapters not just 15 like it says.
i will give myself 5 stars, to increase ratings.... I won't shamelessly say i am doing a best book, its up to you to judge it and rate it...
Sadly I never enjoy flawed systems and insanely stupid MC's. Eve knowing her family's power and tactics would never advocate her name like that so overall this is a great dissapointment in story direction.
biggest complaint is it is not being updated and the author on patreon hasn't updated any of their novels in about a year. I would read it only if you mental stimulation and don't care about the story not being finished. it has a great number of typos as well, but that can easily be forgiven by the storys quality. sometimes forget some of the charecters background with some of the names not being as distinct as they could be between so many charecters. just an issue with harem style books I guess. as a reader who got to the end of the current content and the few extra chapters on his patreon, i wouldn't mind paying to read the rest of the story. Author, if you see this, please restart writing and updating this book. I wouldn't mind paying coins and privilage memberships to read new content.
From what I had read of the last version, this story will be very entertaining. The new writing style that Dawn has decided to use also fits better than the last one in my opinion. Overall, I'm looking forward to how this story will develop past the last version.
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This novel is boring and the author is very repetitive. I disliked this novel from the start, but decided to keep going because I trusted that it should get better afterwards, since there are so many positive reviews. Alas, after almost 400 chapters, I can't read it anymore, not only it is boring as hell, but it gets me angry by how badly written it is. I deeply regret wasting my time reading this piece of trash.
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