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Deep respect to the author, Epic novel.
The Forsaken Hero's narrative balances intrigue, cosmic conflict, and supernatural elements, promising an engaging fantasy adventure. The concept of chosen heroes, enigmatic blessings, and non-interference policies is intriguing.
Honestly, way better than I expected. I can see this novel becoming a top 50 novel in the future if it keeps its pace. Even when I first read Shadow Slave, it only had around 20 chapters and now it's consistently in first and I think this novel has the potential. While it's not completely original, no system novel is, however, this roleplay system seems very unique to me and an interesting take on the genre. I also often am surprised at the authors choices and in fact proud that she or he can avoid common tropes and mistakes. I am looking forward to this novel growing. It has potential, don't ruin it author or drop it. I will hunt you down.
A very nice book, sometimes there are some strange translations or missing words. But the story is good to read.
I like the story the mc is really badass i like how ruthless he is not dense and low-key which really emphasize badass hes kills anyone who gets in he's way and it's just that I kinda feel like he's system is too op he just bought knowledge from system wow 5 - Star Alchemist like what it's just felt like rush and btw the purpose for he's transmigration the Princess which is supposed he's early goals replace by being rules of the world Overall great story tnx.😃
24 year old???? This is so amazing. As a detective, overly determined and comitted to her work, she's great. I love where this story is going. Can't wait.
As someone who has read most of the sports novels on this site, this is original among them, not only that but a system that is balanced unlike (All Soccer Abilities are mine!) This system flows smoothly and the players growth can be explained well. Characters are good, each one has their own personality. MOST IMPORTANTLY, the novel isn’t hard to read, there is no such thing as toughening out some chapters because every chapter is engaging, and finally, I waited a while to write to see the update schedule, and happy to say a good amount of chapters every week. Love it so far. Read it!
The title... it just speaks to me.
Well great stOry but the world is littrealy ****ed up on this novel evry father **** his daughters a mentally sick husband dont mind his wife getting ****ed roght in front of him (well he is mentally ill so uGgh ok?) i liked the story but this world is so unrealistic SexualY wise
Hi Author,
I love the story it's very fascinating. I hope the grammar lapses gets fixed and no it's not just changing tenses but also point of view.
e.g; when the main character is talking about himself as a 3rd persons point of view.
awesome story, perfectly written.I loved it, I honestly love the research done to create the story and how the author research and start the chapter using an awesome quote.
I loved the story, keep it up, and good luck!
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