i love this novel so farhave not completed it yet
This novel has very good grammar, it is pleasent to read and only suffers from slight repetition with certain words and sentences.The first 13 chapters are confusing and the action is somewhat hard to follow, but it sets up a background for future development, so please read all the free chapters before deciding to continue or not. Because the story is actually quite good so far and has lots of potential.Author i hope that you continue to include the other characters in a meaningful way, because i wory this will become a story where the mc is the only one capable of handling things. Such a story can quickly become boring and repetitive.Otherwise you are doing a good job, make sure there is character development as the story progresses.*I like how sirius actually cries a lot, since he is a kid that makes him realistic as well, some authors just make the mc emotionless beasts from the beginning.
A great book indeed. But, am worried about the start. You revealed a lot of information that was supposed to be hidden, thus making the readers know the end. Apart from that, a suggested library as been created for this.
Welcome to "Ascendancy: The Villain's Game " I hope you’re ready for a journey where nothing is as it seems, and the lines between hero and villain blur. Lucian’s story is one of power, betrayal, and survival in a world where only the strongest rise. This is just the beginning, and things are about to get intense.*"The game is just getting started, and in the end, only those willing to embrace the darkness will ascend."*Keep reading, because the true battle has yet to unfold! Thanks for being here, and let’s see just how far Lucian is willing to go.
I think the author set the story and background of the character really well. Being a top assassin, I was expecting him to be a prodigy in combat and from being summoned I was expecting him to be talented in cultivation. This made me really excited to read more. However, out of the blue he gets 3 different personalities that can take over his body which really sucks in my opinion. From there his character comes off as just really inexperienced and much too trusting for someone who was a 'top assassin'. He spills secrets regularly about himself and shows off. Also he full trusts the first person who he interacts with like immediate best friends. It might grow on me later on but at the moment I'm not feeling it.
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traveling to the most extreme and crazy era in history. the starting point of the war to end all wars. princess hildegard is called the german witch, Anastasia: You mean the devil that fascinates people?
Why such small companies? Also, the long reloading time seems unrealistic, as trained line infantry of that era could fire 2–3 volleys per minute with flintlock muskets.
This book has great potential with its interesting concept and captivating plotlines. It may be inspired by other famous works, like what the author has said, but it has its uniqueness. Keep writing and upload more chapters with lots of content, unlike the first few chapters.
imagination, because their life is only
We see the human sky as our land. Whereas humans see our land
I look at him suspiciously, but still I answered. "I can't deny that I got involved in an accident, but what caused the accident were two guys racing their cars. I was driving quietly until one of them lost control and hit my car." I say.