Exciting story!!! I can't wait to read more chapter's.
I recommend this book to everyone who loves to read about romance, suspense, etc... Basically what I'm saying is that this book has it all. The story is so good. I love all the characters and their personalities. The plot twist and suspense cliff hanger make us want more.The author is really doing her best to make it so good. Thank you for this beautiful masterpiece it is worth reading.
Bueno, es bastante fascinante con esas emociones y giros extraños que dan. Además es algo muy perverso algunas cosas, me tiene enganchado y espero tus fics los actualices
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Please. I haven't had a generic cultivation novel in so long. Yall are complaining about the cut and paste generic xianxia novel but first of all, it's copy and paste not cut and paste, stupid, second, have you seen all of the picked novels?! They are either summoner/pet/monster tamer novels or generic "I transmigrated 10 years in the past right before {Bad VR Game Title} came out. I know every secret so I will rule the game" novels. Go complain about those. I really just want to read about some young masters getting face slapped.
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Alright I'm going to be honest if you go into this without expecting to get hooked, you're wrong! This is the type of story that grabs you, thanks to it's intriguing world and setting, the cool and lovable cast of characters and as far as I'm concerned it is well writen!Overall, this is the good stuff, so keep'em coming!
This makes me happy. finally a invincible fam fic
I have some mixed feelings but overall It's decent. I might change this review as the story goes. The world background is at a 5 mainly because the world has lots of potentials but that's mainly because it has all the lore and groups from the SCP multiverse. The writing quality is nice and I didn't notice any crippling grammar mistakes just a few misspelled words. The stability of updates is not consistent but could be released every 1-3 weeks (so far). The characters I don't know how to rank them. I'm not good at writing, grammar, or know an underrated story. Story development sometimes feels too fast, but that's my opinion, and the story is slowly improving on the issue. Overall it has its ups and downs, but I'm a little biased for SCP fanfic (probably because of the lack of ongoing SCP fanfic). So I'm going to give a four-star instead of a 3.8 or 3.6 star. Ps: I'm also a novice reviewer so I might get somethings wrong.
the writing errors overall ruins it, but so does the some nonsensical stuff like, bringing in pre-prepared stuff for a test testing your potential, overall I would've read and payed for more chapters if author would actually fix alot of stufff
I'm loving the story so far. I'm not great at reviews but I hope the author will update soon. It sucks to look back at the first chapters and to realize that you don't like how it was done. So I'm offering some encouragement to be able to finish what you started.