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hello friends ... sorry for late response
Was interesting for a couple of chapters till the annoyingly lazy MC kept getting in the way. Most of the chapters is filled with talk that could be shortened or cut out yet it's there for word count. Females keep being involved for some dumb reason even though no romance, System seems to be getting dumber as it allows him to become even more lazy and trick the system to being unproductive which goes against it.(bad writing) I don't know how someone that got a system to get stronger would continue to be lazy and play games and read when they have superpowers, he reads novels and play games that have powers yet doesn't care that he has powers, seems like a forced reason to be lazy.
"wait... WHAAAAAT!?!?!?!"
Shi Mari said:
I started out with reading the manhwa, after which i read this and it honestly is my one of the favorite things i have read
She could hear a commotion from outside the car. Although the tinted windows were shielding them well, they could still be heard. In the midst of her fuzzy thoughts, she started to panic.
I'm hooked, looking forward to more chapters?
wonderful work of art, the characters are well described so as the environment, playing a perfect scenery in the mind. I must say you did a good one author.
A must read book ...its basically action + romance + cuteness + understanding...+everything needed to make a book worth reading....oh n let's not forget our main leads ....damn they are cute toghter...
I admire the concept and the plot of the novel. Quite intriguing and captivating with each chapter bringing more our of the story. love it.
I really like this story, it reminds me of eren from the attack on the tittans anime, i just hope its not as sad, and the character building is perfect. Good job author. Sasageyo!
Ignoring the blatant attempt to hook readers with the first 20 chaps before the gender reveal, the novel in itself is quite bad. Problem is, MC starts off by fighting and challenging and growing stronger day by day, only to be turned into a weak damsel who tries to hide their strength for meaningless reasons, and acts like a foolish brat. Like, all the good developments were exchanged for the sake of comedy around sweets. Characters are bad and unilateral, without any depth or complexity to them, especially MC. Always the most useless in most situations, never trying their best at anything, never improving past a point while others breeze past them. Stats slowly become meaningless, with MC never showing what they're capable off to others. At points, it seems like hiding their name and power and acting foolish become the main trope of the novel, without any actual seriousness from MC's side.A complete joke of a novel, with a complete joke of a character, who doesn't show any growth whatsoever. Honestly, even if you can get past the first 20 chaps, there's a lot of other things that quickly make you drop it.
