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Nice story but story but some words are missing, can't wait for second season,uh and I can't read next chapter please don't lock next sesaon
I find back the comfort of reading LOHP. It's the same kind with mc who start in school (but student) and get a cheat. There are good friend and other student are not "i will get revenge". No much faceslap or not in the same kind as in LOHP. I enjoyed it, waiting for more impatiently
The idea is good, but even the first few chapters the word count stretching is really dramatic . I wish someone would write a better version of this.
This story is quite good and interesting. You should keep this story going author. I love it
So it’s that time again I have been force- ahem persuaded to once again drag myself out of my cave and review a story. I would like to say this is based on my opinion so take what I say with a grain of salt.Writing quality- for me five stars it’s clean I didn’t notice any errors that hampered my reading and no spelling mistakes were particularly noticed.Stability of updates- again five stars i would give it more if I could since this is the authors second novel which he is updating with his first.Story development- I gave this category four stars this is mostly due to lack of chapters since ideas differ vastly from execution though I will fully admit I like the presented idea of the novel and it’s current progression hence the four stars. Character design- for me it’s five stars I will say I’m not picky. I don’t even need a design for characters to work in my head, but I know some people are rather particular with getting an image so I encourage you to read it and see if it works for you or not.World building- for this I gave it four stars like story development there just isn’t enough for me to say it is amazing though it is brilliantly mysterious and so far consistent though this might change in the future though I hope it doesn’t.Now with Webnovels categories out of the way it’s time for my thoughts and opinions that didn’t seem to fit in any of them. First whilst I’ve said some very nice things about this novel there are some things that bugs me indefinitely that I can’t gloss over like some other choices. The major gripe I have and that’s the author tells a lot to the readers there is little to no inferring of character traits and characteristics of the cast since it’s told straight up with out any subtly. Which I found personally annoying especially when it’s repeated. Though it doesn’t detract from the story. I also so understand that it could just be a style choice and I’m just not clicking with it particularly.Another thing that is related to the a fore mentioned point is that we are told about character moments and that could be fun and show off the characters of Leo and Morganna especially they get shoved to the side with a couple lines of exposition whilst I suspect that this is due to the author wanting a certain pacing of the novel it still feels like a waste of potential of exploring the characters.Right onto something else that I have a slight distaste for character bipolar disorder whilst a lot of the characters are great they are fun to read about as they explore the new world.There is one character that I don’t sit well with and that’s the main character Leo himself aside from the authors Infamous brand of naming (curse you Cruz) the thing i am against is how he shifts seemingly out of nowhere at first he’s introduced as a self proclaimed bastard of a person he isn’t Voldemort evil but he happily sells away the souls of gamers for the chance of resurrection. The only problem I have with this is that he seems to care too much by the people that jump into his game. There isn’t an arc where he learns the benefits of being nice to people he just seems to suddenly care about the players which In my eyes doesn’t fit his established character of being unscrupulous to achieve his dream. I don’t know maybe it’s just me.In conclusion it’s a very fresh story exploring something mystical with a very fun cast of characters. It’s something I would recommend if you enjoy a more mysterious style with a system that is different to the usual whilst I am at odds with something’s in this novel it doesn’t detract from an entertaining read plus my name makes a cameo so there’s that. Now hopefully the author will remove the gun from my head. Pretty please.
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10/10 for ComedyThe only novels I review are either amazing or absolute trash ones. This obviously is the former. This novel has no complicated plot, no scheming antagonists, overpowered MCs, broken bloodlines or heaven-defying beauties.But that's the best part of this novel.What it does have is a slice of life management story with hilarious misunderstandings, with an mc intentionally making dumb decisions and a whole lot of comical situations. A gem amongst hundreds of generic xianxia novels on this platform. Truly a refreshing read.**. This novel is still in the trial phase so make sure to unlock at least one chapter using coins instead of Fastpass. Apparently, that would make you a "fan" of this novel and increases the chances of the translator picking it up for an official release.
Enlightenment, that does not have any meaningful consequences.Discovering your “true” self every 20 chapters gets old quite quick. Especially if it’s essentially meaningless in terms of actions as the MC does not at all change after them. The situations and conversations are also very repetitive and wordy for no reason. A lot of potential though for improvement as the concept and world are quite interesting even if not wholly innovative. The women, booze and gambling aspect is fun but again lacking in execution.
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oh something different. is a bit refresh from all this rebirth thingies.though there are times the translator mix up the gender (the he/she) used wrongly. but overall good stories. wish this book picked up so we can have something new to read