It's good. Please, Keep on releasing new chap, I fell like it will be worth waiting your update ..................................................
MC IS A COWARD, STUPID AND A SHUT -IN NERD. THE STORY DEVELOPMENT IS TOO SLOW I MEAN LITERALLY AFTER HE TRANSMIGRATES THE FIRST THING HE DOES IS TRYING TO RUN EVEN THOUGH HE CLEARLY KNOWS THAT HE IS IN A FAIRLY OVERPOWERED BODY AND THAT RABBIT DEMON IS 2 WHOLE LEVELS LOW IN COMPARISON BUT NOOOOO HE STILL TRIES TO RUN BUT I READ IT SOMEHOW TILL 55+ CHAPTERS AND IT WAS STARTING TO GET BETTER BUT MC WHO REALLY DOESNT KNOW HOW THE CULTIVATION WORLD WORKS ACCEPTED DISCIPLES AND NOT EVEN TRYING THAT ZEALOUS MAKING TECHNIQUES BECAUSE THERE IS STILL DAMN 30% CHANCE THAT THEY MIGHT BETRAY YOU BUT NOOOOOOO YOU HAD TO LEAVE THEM BE GIVE HIM YOUR EXCLUSIVE LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE. AUTHOR:YOU SHOULD ATLEAST TRY TO LEVEL HIS CULTIVATION TO 2 LEVELS HIGHER BEFOR GIVING HIM DISCIPLES AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN HIM HIS LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE BECAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A KIND OF UNIQUENESS TO THEIR POWERS. THATS ALL
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Please pick up this book! This author is hilarious and I can't wait to read more of his books!
I love his novel ideas and wicked sense of humour. Keeping fingers crossed...
I'm awaiting to see how this story will develop. The story is only just beginning, it is still in its earlier stages, can't tell how it will deviate from the original storyline plot, but stI'll kept true to the Douluo Dalu universe.
I really like your story and your way of writing but I just cant further take in and read the fact that his mother is a ***** and a slut but shows concern to him. If only that plot was changed... ha gud luck since i am dropping it.
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This Novel is quite good but they should now stop spamming this this type of story.Story is interestingMC cheat allow him change his beast's bloodline e.t.cranking system in this Novel is quite ez to understand.I definitely recommend this book.
Really interesting novel that takes a bit of a different approach to the story line. MC does not start out as an all powerful character and instead develops along with with a cast of several. 50+ chapters in and the MC is still barely out of the noob village. The story is good and catches and keeps your attention. My only complaint is some of the spelling errors that can throw the reader out of the story. With a good editor this novel could easily be a good seller on Amazon.
It's really good, definitely recommend.The story about demon girl who's actually has a real "sense" about her own kind, descending into a mortal realm just to find normality of daily life her own kind cannot afford. I see a lot of potential in this story, especially that naive demon girl.Overall, the narration is very vivid yet complex, easy yet interesting to understand if you have very good imagination since there are many implied messages and foreshadowing future which is very nice, especially in monologues, and environment descriptions.In conclusionTen out of ten