I have read 14 chapters so far, and haven't seen many grammar mistakes
(although I'm not a native speaker)
the only thing that hurt me was the random info drop in the middle of the chapter by the "Author Note"
in my opinion it would have been better if this information was presented during the story,
it threw me out of the immersion, but other than that it's a great stuff to read
although I'm a little worried about the little sister, I really hope she won't be the typical "sick little sister who needs the MC's help"
- Anyway I recommend it to everyone who likes dark vibe and isekai
it's not worth it just delete it I thought I know reading the title that this thing would be good and I just read the 1st chapter and that's enough I mean google translate would probably be better than this I mean really try reading this comment because the author write likes me just space and enter no other marking even the dialogue absolutely nothing
After reading up to 300 chapter…It still annoying that author forget reward items from completing the mission.
Another thing is development between Mc and Fmc is very bad. Mc already made her female alpha and kiss her once and they go back to same relationship as before.
But main thing to offset me is the rewards items. Do not give reward items if you will forget to use it
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Starts ok and them it turns into magical realismThe comedy is basically "he starts the simulation and he dies"And one final note THAT'S A VERY LONG 10 DAYS
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Really can't understand why this boom isn't receiving more attention, a great world building, a unique power system as well as the good use english grammar, makes this book a must read for me.
To be honest I'm already being suffocated by the type of novels here at webnovel and this can be the fresh air that I seek. I think that historical and kingdom building novels are the missing part that can fulfill my hunger for some good reading experience.
A bit disappointing. The main character was made as dull a stone. Just because he has a bit of power he lorded over normies? He also have no survival instincts. The conflict is a bit on the nose where the MC trips over and making conflicts bigger.
if I traveled back 3 years ago. I will not focus on the game super hard. just enough to earn some good money. I will not try to be no.1 player cuz I believe if you failed once when all was fair then you have no right to say you are the best player with 3 years of ahead knowledge. Hell, the thing I would focus would be earning money in the real world as you already know the future. OOh, wait we are talking about an otaku gamer so no chance they know what the stock prices are. So nevermind my rant but I would just be content being a merchant and making money and selling information for astronomical numbers instead of doing the same F***ing grind. Peace out.
The first chapters just terrible but it rapidly picks up after that. The premise of the storys a lot of fun as well presenting an unusual take on the dungeon core genre.
So no spoilers. This book so far as I have read which is to Chapter 20. I know it is not a lot the translation seems to be machined or the person who translate does not understand English needs to be edited bad. You can get the gist of what is going on. The overall story is not horrible but the MC plot armor is super thick everything just happens no build up or accident. I think it was suppose to be accidental but if so the author or translater all failed that. Otherwise I would at least give this a shot for the free chaps and if you like it keep going. For me till this thing is edited to make sense I am done.