I like the story. That's not all, the synopsis is already interesting, plus the plot is good, so I want to read on.
excited to update the next chapter
I think this is a copycat/webnovel stolen idea. I found a MTL novel: mtlnation (dot) com/novel/cracking-the-case-crazy-i-can-see-the-crime-scene/
Basically the same summary. The plot seems different; at least chapter 40 (the only chapter i checked) is different.
2.4 star is my real review but ı wıll give it 1 star because it doesnt deserve 4.5 rating at all. Mc is plain stupid and his logic is ex. flawed. All side charecters are poorly written. So called emp of country or his retainers doesnt have any ıq at all. Any way ın my opinion this novel ısnt worth to west your time on it.
It’s an interesting concept however the MC gets annoying at times. Moments where all he had to do was speak up to clear a misunderstanding he didn’t, I don’t know if it was an attempt at humour but it gets tiring after the first.
Also similar to what another reviewer said, forge apprentices are basically slaves but for some reason because of the MC they allow them to compete with other nations for important territory changing decisions (up to ch 122 so far). Like… what?
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So far its actually been pretty interesting. Its more logical then I expected and explains most of the decision. For a trail read over I think its pretty solid. Not sure how it will develope though.
alli can say is great as novel it is better than most upgrade apocalypse novels can be said to be close to the top the translation is also good theres no super patriotism and it dosent only focus on asia(like the ones on trial read or pilot) and the mc is actually maturing from being naive instead of staying a bad xianxia mc wich goes looking for trouble
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I thought it was really good until around 68, as soon as the kobold part started my interest in the story dropped I can already see him going around helping people he barely knows with nothing in return just because they'll do it for him, so the guy says that he shouldn't put them in danger, so he feels warm inside and helps them out, so they're friends forever and will likely stay that way forever.
I think it would be better for him to go through the forest alone, marrying all kinds of living beings until he climbs the food chain, and if he helps someone he would have to give something in return, very good, it would also be good one time he finds a mate to the two to evolve together.
(it was translated in google translate some parts may be wrong)
it seems he knows what he's writing about. good.
The book is going great until now!! Evan though seems ambitious, he portrays a positive character. The descriptions are well written and i genuinelly wish that he gets to meet Iriene someday.. good luck to you author.. keep it up!![img=update]