Keith_Samayo

very interesting

nice story exciting

The story line was good. There were some grammatical errors. At times the characters were a little annoying but all in all it was enjoyable to read.

Awesome story!

I loved it, I loved reading shorts stories. But this one is superb. Everyone would enjoyed reading it without waiting to much to an end.

It’s amazing that almost every comment is a complaint about the same thing, the ratings are dropping, & yet the author just continues to drag and drag and drag…. Pretty dumb move by the writer

I love reading your work! I can even wait for the updates! Which I hate doing

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This book was really magical

Very good story i hope this was a series tait for another episode

Amazing book!

Can’t wait for updates