writing quality is bad, characters are annoying, if you have time then i would say you can give it a chance, who knows maybe it will fir ur taste. and i see quite a bit of fake reviews there.
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This is by far One of the best if not the best Harry Potter fan fiction I've read, all I ask of you is to not drop it... But if you do have a solid reason to do so I won't/can't blame you... Pls keep this personality of his it is very different in all the others that I have read and the one where Harry is in Slytherin is fairly rare so I give my support to you!!! (even though it may not mean much)
He is a great fighter in real life, but he is mistakenly assigned a "Mage" job class in a virtual reality game! He is someone who uses power to conquer power, so he makes the most out of the mistake and transforms into a fierce Mage, versed in close combat, in the blink of an eye! By perfectly combining strength and spells, he uncovers a new path of gaming!Fireball? Chain Lightning? Frost Mirror… Wait just a minute; I’ve come to practice kung fu! Spells have nothing to do with me! What’s that? I’m a Mage? Oh, right! I am a Mage indeed. But… Are you certain I’m one? Alright… Feel the might of my saber! My sword! My hidden weapons! What? You’re saying I’m no Mage now? Let me prove it to you if you don’t believe me! But even if you believe me, I will still show you just how unstoppable a Mage who knows kung fu can be!
Those 2 of 3 stars translation quality only goes to the editor since the grammar actually better than most novels on this site. As for "translator
The novel is perfect, the character’s attitudes work well together and despite the clichés it is top tier. I love these kinds of shop/store novels, but I can only find a few that are good to read. The only downside would probably be the slow updates sometimes. Keep up the good work!
TO not gave much away here is what to expect before readingStarts off good and you get a scrawny kid uses mind to climb to better life as slave. Faces hardship grows and the torture gets to him turns him seeking hurt (Masochist). Foriegn forces intereferes yet he perseveres. All of a sudden things go down from their. As the author claims he pays good deeds and bad deeds. NOT true. At a point you take him as an Evil MC and accept his action. Somethings I can not accept is to empower his enemy and also to give up on his friend/saviour and gets same enemy more girls by spending a lot of money.I could accept all his evil, but this was my bottom-line. There might be some clever scheme of MC or whatever but when the person involved in this perhaps the only relatable, human person that helped the MC it is no longer something I can endure. Good luck with your work and continue on. You are a good writer unfortunately the story is no longer for me. Do not be discouraged, this is not my niche story. Below is a summery of why I gave up, it contains spoilers. 1 - MC starts off a slave and you wish him well 2 - MC climbs in rank - gets pushed into situation by F where everyone dies3 - MC survives barely with the help of F's *** slave M 4 - He gets know M and kisses her, they are close now 5 - She wishes to be free - he tries and helps her6 - He gets out of situation but does not really take revenge, In facts delays it (You can assume he is a masochist for it to understand )7 - He later goes some where and does some stuff taking more punishment, heartache turns to a welcoming mat8 - He had some fights looking good for him, but his plans fail because of an annoying person, but uses a mother figure to get back affection 9 - story gets good, he is not a zombie that getting spit on, but haves fun with an alter-ego 10 - M who has saved him is given to F her old owner, F who also wanted to kill him is improved with his unique gift and MC schemes against M - He gives F another beutiful girl, when things do not go his way - he is now against M to make her jelous and alone, so she can run back to her old owner.
I cant believe its finished I loved the book it was amazing and Full of excitment, I loved the characters,Well done on completeing you book
i went into this not expecting much but boy was i pleasantly surprised.Love the characters so far the my favorite part. some of the things that need to be worked on for it to be 5.0 for me. It kinda read likes a slightly edited mtl novel which makes it a little jarring at times.
This book is really dumb, the MC gains the ability to just change people's choices on things but we don't actually get to see the choices. The book will talk about how "number 1 is bad and number 3 is the best option" but it never tells you what those options are so it's super frustrating to read