Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.
The novel is perfect, the character’s attitudes work well together and despite the clichés it is top tier. I love these kinds of shop/store novels, but I can only find a few that are good to read. The only downside would probably be the slow updates sometimes. Keep up the good work!
This story could have been little interesting if the character design , world background was better . There are many inconsistency in the plot one moment he is talking then suddenly next chapter he is doing something entirely different . story is not connected at all its like every chapter is not connected there are many time where chapter and plot is repeating . It is very tiring to read this . I sincerely hope that that the can be edited again and little changes are made so that it can become readable. I still have this in my library hope see the Improvement .
Author's Shameless Review:It's a concept work. No real plot. Just lots of loner life moments. Hope you enjoy the meaningless read anyway.For readers who are doing the side quests in the author note of every chapter, you're the best kind of people in the world!
Nice start and good story. Ihope to see the next one soon. And i hope you continue this story. You have my support author.And damm u 140 character review!!?
