Overall im loving this novel, karma system isnt too difficult to figure out and cultivation levels etc are well explained. MC is developing pretty well so far will have to see how we go in the future.
The man are blown away two meters from where he was standing. He lost his consciousness as soon the ball of energy hit him.
"I'll release the trap so don't bite me, I think I am an idiot for talking to a big wolf like you, and do wolves have horns? and by the way, you might not look like it but I'm certain you are about 3 to 4 times bigger than a regular wolf, its just that you are thin."
Lu Jian wanted to refute her. At the same time, Jiang Wui and Shen Ya came in together.
- Gentleman! Is it ready?! – The surprised four mechanics turn to me and smile, the chief mechanic responding as he gets up, cleaning his hands with a rug from the oil.
"It's easier if I just show you the video"
Bo Jiu arched her brows, a mischievous smile on her face as she leaned forward. "What exactly do you wish to say?"
He likes to fight too much and sometimes he doesn't think or try to strategies, if you face him with brute force he will face you with brute force but you can also say that this is his charm, what makes him him, the chapter I'm at, he as started realizing his short comings so that's goodPls update more frequently abeg my bro??
The prologue created a nice atmosphere and also delivered a nice background as to what the story's gonna be. The author has exceptionally succeeded to raise my curiosity. So I hope he rolls out the later chapters fast....
I am trying to understand the novel more. There is a stable release of chapters at least. Please change the cover. Surely you can find a more beautiful cover than that
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English and Grammar is appropriate. Minimum errors on all current chapters which is good. As it does not have that much chapters, an appropriate review for plot, character, and world background would not be given. However, for a beginning, it would be overall be better than an good amount of works already.Keep up the good work. Happy writing!