It started badly, but the author managed to pick it up. Its plot is interesting. There are too many twists. It makes it difficult to guess. A classic tragic hero. It still manages to be unique in its class. I believe it has great untapped potential.
Make the MC cold mc, indifferent mc, evil mc, unfriendly mc, lonely mc, or rational mc, with no romance, no harem, no girls, and no poisonsOk?
How… just… how…The author somehow made the best reincarnation story out there, and it isn’t #1! This is a crime against the human race. All jokes aside, I read this novel in a few days, less so if I didn’t have college. It literally consumed my life up until I caught up. Do yourself a favor and read this thing right now. P.S author: I would so buy this as a physical book series. Hire a(n) artist(s), update the cover art/character art, and profit (if you haven’t already, I’m writing this almost immediately after finishing chapter 122).
Worst piece of ****. I stop reading after chapter 91. This novel is the worst there is. The author just killed the characters that has best potential in this novel. Don't read this I'm warning you. Fuck this ****. The worst novel I've read in my whole life.
Good stuff this. Though, it hasn't been updated for a month. Hopefully the author for comes back to this to finish it up. Apparently my review isn't enough characters long yet. Let me try to post again.
Such a incredible book .... What a interesting story. Webnoble should really really published book . This is getting really really awesome I hope it gets out soon.
Sachin nice plot with incredible characters and a mysterious background of the kingdom is really nice . looking for what to it coming out .
I like it just the way it is. Only had a minimal error and tge authr is nice we just need a lot of reader so that the author doesnt drop hehehe. Right @DaoOfTheMoon
the story takes too long to solve things seriously one day it takes ten chapters that makes the story very boring AsdfghSfgnujxjjdjdkfkfjdjjdkdmmdkdkf
The book have a very interesting premise and the writing quality is superb. However, there are many things that I noticed about the novel that drags it down. The story developes in a very weird and confusing was that make it hard to follow or understand. Importent things and features are added in randomly without any explanation really on what they do and their importance to the overall story. The MCs thought process can be said to be cunning but also a bit one tracked minded. One example of this is when MC kills someone and obtains a new cultivation system, and decides to join that organization in the future to obtain the resources needed in the future when there is a million other things that needed to be done beforehand. The people's thought process in the novel just seem a bit out of place, with them doing things in certain ways to make the story work. This can be greatly attributed to the lack of info provided to us by the author. With random cultivation systems added and new things(treasures,seeds,currency ) introduced it just becomes confusing. The author tries to provide mystery and it is intriguing, but with the severe lack of knowledge regarding the current situation the mysterious aspects just becomes hazy and bring apon more confusion. The power system is also very complex, which is understandable in the world setting currently. The math in the novel is a but wonky but not too bad if u don't look into it too much. the power levels of individuals are all over the place with individuals killing people of way higher cultivation levels and being in places they shouldn't be. (one example is a heavenly god killing a dao emperor in the mortal realm, but is still a weakling in the ground scheme of things when dao emperors are the highest level Acheivalble). I have quite a dislike of the system which seems to be very out of place and provide random helpful things with little to none explanation. Maybe it's just me who find the book confusing with the lack of information, and others can decipher it fine. Overall the book is a decent read, and has a very interesting concept.
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well how do I put it, have you ever play some Pay to Win Game where developer purposely try to piss off player by gorging typical intrusive ads, yeah this is how I felt whenever I read this s#it.basically you git your typical Lu Yuan who is a transmigrator without system but in exchange he got more Plot Armor than typical xianxia genre because whatever he did some asspull plot armor by author will always help him, not to mention so many toxicity of peanut gallery where mc face slapping everyone else via plagiarizing other people's work not to mention if you're not really into acts like music,chinese poetry & movie you won't even understand why its awesome.basically this is a rio off of Library of Heaven where mc make use of his future knowledge to release new arts in order to face slap everyone else, heck atleast Zhang Xuan were smart enough to use his hrain sometime while Lu Yuan is thorough loser angst man who blame everything on everyone else why he's simply a lazy bummer & the main cause of his misfortune fate.
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