this story is so goood! the author surely did a lot of work on this. im so hooked up with this story! i never thoight that i will like this kind of book. good job author!
Interesting beginning, the hero seems to be the type to do anything although his actions at first seem meaningless, finally I find the topic of the worm strange, but overall I find this a good book that I enjoy.
This review is based up to chapter 60 of the novel.
Initially I felt this was only mediocre in the beginning. Although it had an interesting setting, it was a little slow moving and I was even considering dropping it. But, alas, I had just dropped Boss Monster Chat (very disappointing!!!!!), so I decided to continue or I would have nothing to read! I'm actually glad I continued, because this starts to pick up once they enter the human world. I'm pretty interested in how it'll continue and hope that there will continue to be interesting developments in the real world. I love when they act as hidden experts and then reveal their powers to face slap everyone! Highly enjoyable.
So far this is the best I've read from the new batch, so I hope it gets chosen!
So are we just going to copy and paste ‘sign-in buddha’s palm’?! If so I already read it. Not quite sure what’s going on here, but am looking forward to reading the comments. *grabs popcorn*
not sure if it's the author that posted it but it's probably stolen from rr. over 150 chapters on rr so you don't have to waste your time on this site
Alright i can’t fkin take it anymore. I’ve read up to the current chapter 83 and while I enjoyed it at the start, the MC has some severe mental retardation and ADHD. He goes on and on about how he needs to be stronger and this and that to the point where *SPOILER* his parents die right in front of him. Instead of using his 2 bases FULL of resources to sit down and cultivate, he decides to wander the fking world and comes across another dungeon. He literally cant sit still at all to cultivate and icnreSe his power. He’s been given this holy grail of cultivation and skills and a body suited for cultivation but does NOTHING with it. It took him an entire year before he even decided to cultivate to start. Now, he keeps getting his butt handed to him by creatures a rank hogher than him but he does nothing to cultivate into the next rank. He has this faulty logic that somehow skills will make him stronger but the author goes on to prove how wrong that idea is because the gap between servant and noble rank creatures is, AND I QUOTE, “100times more pwoerful” and even a fraction of the aura these moble creatures let out just forces all servant ranks to kneel. they are completely helpless against it, so you’d think he’d focus on breaking theough to the next rank? Especially since he’s at the peak right before the next rank, right? NO he just cant fkin sit still and cultivate and power through the beginning phase of cultivation. The start of cultivation novels should always go quickly but the author spends so much time just absolutely wasted on pointless stuff when clearly personal power matters the most. idk man this novel has compeltely frustrated me and I think the author is ruining a good setup and world he built.he even gets saved not once not teice but 3 fking times bY this random godly chick with an umbrella and he’s forced into submission and frozen every time. He legit cant do anything and he’s being shown over and over that personal strength and power matters the most but he refuses to sit down and cultivate.
StorY: 2/5 (Great premise but ruined by author with dumb decisions)
Character: 0/5 (idiot MC that complains endlessly but does zero to improve perosnal power while having s golden spoon)
Writing: 4/5 (decent grammer few mistakes)
Plot: 3/5 (ruined by author with dumb decisions)
Updates: 3/5 (1ch a day or every few days so it’s average and nothing special)
I enjoy reading it....but yeah that's that...I wonder if the mc include legal/illegal loli?? hahaha anyway I think its better if the copy skill include a function like erase or just replace other skill not add a limited one?
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I can't get enough of this story. I think this might win for my favorite story of the year, unless it ties with one other story, as the rest so far are not as much fun, fulfilling or fascinating as this one is. It feels fresher for the way it's put together. I'm moved through wide range of feelings. I would love to see drawings from this story because the ones that come to mind are breathtaking from what I've read so far. My only wish is that I could read this in its original language; something is always lost in translation. I look forward to reading this. I wish you, Sanseiu, much success in this story.
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my only complaint is that the main character, a reincarnated 18 year old, acts as if he's mentally 2 years old near the beginning of the novel, which is rather frustrating. other than that, it's pretty solid.
This Novel makes no like to do all sorts of painful things to the Author...... and that with a smile Don't ask why.Don't say ,,no one cares,,Don't come with I am crazy...becouse I know it already ?