I’ve got to give myself a pat on the back. Writing a novel is no small task, and creating stories that resonate with people isn’t easy. Props to me for making it happen! ?
I have never seen as much Chinese propaganda as in this novel.the MC is also pretty stupid so it doesn't help any.---------spoilers?--------Examples:MC has now a USA Predator Drone. What does he do?1. Unveil the existence of his Drone in front of streamers for the world to see so that he can sink the evil bullies that are the Korean coastal guards, harrasing those poor Chinese fishermen.2. Is given the location of the out-of-city location of his two current enemies by a guy he capture, but instead of using his Drone's missiles to kill them, he instead go there himself with the guy he captured. Enough said.and then there's everything that relates with his company, with the evil Western investors who dare invest in China or those evil Japanese who want to steal China's advanced technologies...
i like the suspense, hope it lasts, good luck
Writing Quality: 4/5It was not bad, better than a lot I seen on here. Keep up with the good grammar. Although the dialogue bothers me because I don't know who is talking.Updating Stability: 5/5I give that to everyoneStory Development: 4/5Good plot, although it is more descriptions and less dialogue. I did enjoyed the storyline and pacing.Character Design: 5/5Not bad, I don't have much to say though.World Background: 5/5Extremely descriptive, doesn't live anything out on how the world is.Keep up the good work!
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I have read the first twelve chapters and this book is a bomb! The bickering between the leads is very funny and so well-written! I definitely want to read everything this author writes!
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Why do authors love making main characters so disappointing? The guy reincarnated but acts like a child. If he had forgotten his past life and only remembered fragments, that would be understandable, but here he is—a full-grown adult acting like a kid. Chapter 21 is especially frustrating. He, his five-year-old twin sister, and another girl go through a portal. This other girl is taken by a flying creature, and here’s what the author writes: > "Nox and Nyx remained rooted to the spot, trying to come up with a plan. Nyx stayed calm, but Nox's fingers trembled. Why wouldn’t he be restless? Coming into this dimension had been his idea, after all. If anything went wrong here, it would be his fault, and he would blame himself for the rest of his life. ‘Do you still have any tricks?’ Nyx had a bitter smile on her face, staring at her brother from the side of her eyes."Notice that the five-year-old girl, who was just born recently, is calmer than this clueless idiot. Plus, the fact that he calls his twin sister his "older sister"… A grown man calling his *twin* sister, who’s five, his "big sister"? That’s where I draw the line.
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