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If you like VRMMORPG novels, make sure to check this one out. In this novel the main character visits all sorts of different scenarios, each one has its own tale to tell and an interesting mystery to unravel. This makes each arc fresh and exciting, and allows the book to move away from a standard wow clone.I don't really like the description, the description makes it sound like the novel is a dystopian survival novel, when its more like an exploring multiple words one.
A complete Disappointment .The only decent chapter of the entire story up to the latest update is the 1st chapter (or is it ?) Repetitive grinding , bad humor, lacking in creativity and on top of that in the later chapters you will get to know that the author is most probably a racist too . Honestly I don't think this story should be translated in QI .
so you get to spend money for free but don't have the brains to do it. then this MC is you mentor. praise him......any way i have read many novels with dumb MCs but this one bravo took the first place with remarkably outstandingly huge lead.MC which have money to spend and 10 years of future experience still can't think outside of the box. some will say that this is a gag novel yes it is but gag novel doesn't mean brain dead MC. any way read it if you like tiring your mind with braindeadness of the MC.
During the first 40 chapters I was very frustrated reading this novel because it was almost the exact carbon copy of Desolate era. I like desolate era but I did not want to read something exact similar to it. But I managed to endure and believe me I was glad that I did not drop this novel because it was fricking great. I all recommend all of you to stick to it until the end.Dear author you did a great job there but I think you should change your writing style a bit since you write a lot of chapters about some things which were not necessary like you spend 5 chapter just explaining the abilities of eye of myriad dao which could have been done in just about 2.5 chapters. So what I want to say is that you focus a lot on unnessary chapters. Anyway keep up the good work.
THIS NOVEL IS LOSING ITS READERS.THE UPDATE STABILITY IS TRASH. 5chaps per week? more like 1 chapter per 2 weeks. or even a month.FTW IS GOING ON? SO IM GONNA RATE IT 1
i have to say i like the story itself but author you are focusing too much on filling chapters an entire just descriping the characters after about 2 to 5 chpaters i amnot saying it is a bad thing but too many times is annoying as of now i read about 70 chapters that could be written in 50 or less even on good way what's more almost every chapter when you make a change on the scene or switching between two scene you must start as an unknown figure then identifies it man that's honostly too much that's making it annoying too much annoying .the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks
Why did webnovel choose the one that has 1 vote is beyond me. Just why there is over a 1000 votes to the other novels why is this one here. Like did you guys got bribe or something
i am still waiting for an update from: your fan????????????????????????????????????????????????
........................... Nice one................................... I so much love it................................... It has a nice beginning........................
ahhhh I really fell in love with this novel.keep it up
Amazing first 150 chapters, strong next 75 too. All starts to go downhill after leaving Nitis though in my opinion.Despite the obvious need for Liiza and Khan to split (she was taking up way too much of the plot), the author's justification is pretty poor.The random flings and romances thereafter only serve to give 'proof' to the readers that moving in from Liiza was the right decision.Overall very strong novel, but the poor romance developments have really disappointed me. If you can beat with that you'll thoroughly enjoy it though.
