I found it impossible to suspend my disbelief.Nowhere near enough info about how dungeons work, how people enter them, who's monitoring them, required permissions etc.Character development and motivations are also lackluster. So you have an MC who is tired of hunting in the dungeons, and what does he do after retirement? You guessed it, hunting in the dungeons. Except now he's supposed to be carrying stuff around, yet he keeps getting involved in fighting anyway.All but one of the hunters die in the dungeon, yet all of the carriers survived? Nah, nothing suspicious, nobody investigates stuff, business as usual.MC wanted to spend more time with his kid, but he keeps dungeon hunting at every opportunity, even if it means leaving his son with his recruiter whom he barely knows. Who accepts it without complaint for some bizzare reason.
morning star here , haha nice book.nothing more to say, didn't thought it would get this good
Great book on chapter 28 love it already giving me naruto vibes kinda would love extra chapters other than that this a very good book recommend for everyone.
I really enjoyed how the author make this story, how the author shape the world of this story and how the author create nice pace on the plot.
Very nice, the idea is spot on and it's well written overall the release rate is a bit slow so if you could fix that it would be great, I see that it would become a great novel if you improved on that aspect.Besides that give me MORRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It's a good novels , with no errors that stand out. thou since advice for the author, it's wayyy too fast paced and chapters are very short. you could have really spent 2-5 on every development of his story it'll still be faced paced but filled with more detail and depth. there's not much attachment to the mc now as everyone praises him,his parents(after not believing in him in the first few chaps),the fans ,the system ,the coaches ,the world. you've got something with alot of greatness all over it, but it needs more realism ,conversations, depth and length. at this pace he'd become the goat in a few years.
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Here we go, starting the book already noted a piss poor effort of chapter translation. Will read up to chapter and update my review if needed.
I just need one answer to start reading does it have NTR?. If yes, I will not read it it's disgusting....................................................................
I really really like the story, its funny, and the maids are brilliant however the translation quality is rivaling the worst MTL Ive ever read. It frequently mixes up gender pronouns like shes into hes and sometimes will simply shorten sentences into something completely unintelligible. If anyone knows where I can find the raws to this theres a 9/10 chance itll be better translated because I really want to read this but the qualitys so poor.
Alright Here I am After reading 189 chapters,I could still read more but yeah I've come to a decision that this is the most optimal state to comment about this novel as it has come to a great changeWriting quality:- 5 ? the writing quality is pretty good,I can actually feel immersion and realism while reading the novel... The author's ways of describing stuff is really unique and interesting as well.Story Development:- 4? Now this is one of the most shocking thing for me as the story's writing,Tone and almost everything changed drastically... and yeah the change was absolutely awesome,But yeah the reason I gave it four star is because it feels inconsistent to me and I feel the pace of the story should be properly adjusted because other than it's pretty good Character design:- 5 ? The character's personality is explained properly and there are times where we can relate to them and sometimes I agree and predict the decisions they make,So yeah it pretty good. The characters are interesting to say the leastUpdating stability:- Uhh I'm not sure about it since I binge read the whole so yeah let's not talk about this one World background:- 4 ? although I understand that too much world background sometimes makes the story boring but in this case It would be better if I could get some details out of the places he visits,Like when he visits different places In a particular floor you only mention it as it's a village,Or there is a place with a waterfall and the triad territory has lots of trees other than that it's pretty goodNow my personal opinion,It's a pretty good novel with an interesting story with a bunch of characters and it's fun read