Dawn_Lasagna
Rusak bgt bos grammar nya. Kalo ndak niat perbaikin mending ni ya pake bahasa indo aja. Mo baca jadi mager gara2 otak rusak duluan mahamin english ente.
epic. i laughed, i cried, i couldn't put it down. there is a depth here that a lot of newer chinese webnovels don't have. a must-read for anyone interested in the genre.
I have read the 60 chapters thats out so far.. and can for ones say that i crave for more!.. so far its good, and i wounder where this story will take us.. it has just the right amount of indeep of the people, not to little and not to much.. i like how you arent always sure what will happen next.. and how the mc always tryes to keep it fun, and think of the players❤️
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It’s not a bad story. The whole plot of the MC being reborn as a creator is a really interesting concept. Other than some disjointed points in the flow of the plot, overall it’s a fun story to read.
Xia Shishu was an ordinary 17-year-old high school student with immortal story love. System chose him as its Host,System looks quite normal, but his mindset gradually changed as time passed. System that allowed him to transcend the limitations of the human body!
His sister’s persistence in addition to the emergence of his System, Xia Shishu entered the newly released Virtual Reality game, Second Reality! To his amazement, the items he received in-game can also be taken outside to the real world and vice-versa!
With a combination of his System & Second Reality, his life should become more amusing!
I love story but no up date for 6 month. So I gues droped ):
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Need more chap to get review like what that other said, but it's good tho, just need more chapters (again?) so yeah
I support you author, do your best!!
Good book interesting, without any cheats that make the person succeed in everything they do........................................................
Among recent Trial this is one of best.This is gem.Mc have OP cheat.Story is quite interesting.Translation should improve more.this Novel must pick.I suggest both old and new reader must try it.Mc character quite good.
I see the cover, i see the sypnosis.I see the cover, i see the sypnosis, again.I see the cover, i see the sypnosis, for the 3rd time.N this continued for a few moment.Yu want to know why??Its bc I cant see the two big plot that was mention by author.
Give this one a four star review! Having read it before, I can never stop wondering WHAT happens NEXT!!shame the last update was right before the coronavirus outbreak. hope nothing happened. ?
