Thie novel reminds me of legendary mechanic but I pove the concept of commanders. Overall just a unique concept and good read. Keep updating and ill keep reading author
Good work author, the story is different from others which makes it unique, interesting synopsis too, I'm liking the MC already, although this story is still in it early stage but I can tell it has a lot of potentials so I'm rooting for Ya, and I'm also expected of it. Keep up the good work.
I usually don't give a review on anything but THIS, THIS is the thing that motivated me to do it. The characters as of now which is ch 11 are great. The story is great. I really hope this won't end up as the last one and I will be silently supporting the author and the book. Good luck author?
This book has what it takes to reach the top.Quality: CheckConsistent Updates: CheckLikeable protagonist with clear flaws which can be fixed and developed on: Check.I must admit I was very impressed by the starting chapters. All that’s left is to maintain this quality and consistency.
Translation sucks but the story is good.. seems like machine translation with bit of editing
Like others have said, the translation quality is borderline trash. It really feels like MTL that was lazily edited. Other than that, the story itself is quite good. Decently paced, a little bit like slice of life, but with an immortal protagonist fumbling his way through traditional cultivation. So far, it doesn't seem like there will be any outrageous xuanhuan tropes, so I'm hoping this gets selected. It's a great change of pace.
i like the story, i am reading it as it is serialized. i like every chapter. content is amazingly presented. i recommend this novel. I also easily understood the vocabulary.keep it up author
So far so good, the grammar is pretty good. Itachi's personality in this novel is believable. I look forward to future chapters. This is worth a read for those who like both itachi and atg!
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Doesn’t look like the Tang Sect
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The novel is ok but the grammar kills it like when ur grammar is wrong it changes the meanings of the words and what u are trying to tell in ur story may get interpreted as an another thing I suggest u use grammarly to edit ur chaps.