Really good novel, I find the power system very intresting, the world development is good as well, author only needs to work on evoking emotions or tensions, i don't know if it's only for me but, I couldn't feel much emotions when reading about character death's, and mc back story. that's the only thing i want you to work on, apart from that, the book is really good, i don't know if you're planning on adding romance but i think this is a good time to add that (ch 333)
Interesting story so far . engrossing and rich characters.
The story gives off a fresh new take on transmigrating. The thought that weapons, gadgets and equipment were sent instead of the person itself gives the story an unusual and unique take on an otherworldly experience. I am excited to know how all of these weapons will give color to this story, and also where will all of us be taken to in the journey of this story. Will the author just focus on the Pacific Island Tribe? Or will we be exploring the other countries, states, or organizations that the other weapons have gone to..?
I want you to add more Chetan bhagats work but with his name like, one night at the call center, two states, halfgirlfriend, one Indian girl
Really author ace I read it before now and I see it is interesting but have few readable grammatical error ...if you don't believe me just get a proofreader and see what am saying thnks
Holy moly, when you said the updateing speed, I thought you were joking! What the hell, man! The story and everything are really good! The main is not too op, the world is layered like an onion, the plot is realllllly unpredictable and you are, my friend, a 200 IQ writer!
A little more effort into proofreading and this becomes an absolute gem in this genre.Honestly, this was far less recognition than it should have. Keep up the work
I absolutely adore the story. I love how funny and immersing the characters are. I especially love the interactions between the MC and the butler. I simply wish for the other chapters to release soon.
First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!
Plagiarism. Jest search the internet for the same webnovle. The original is excellent and has way more fo free on royalroad.DO NOT VOTE FOR THIS. HELP REMOVE THIS FROM HERE.
Personally Like everything about it, however I can only hope at this point that this book gets picked up to be translated further since I believe there are already a decent amount of chapters already written, just not translated up to good quality. Can only hope, despite it being months already.
so many grammatical errors. In every chapters, either weight classification changed i.e. pounds, Jun , carries and once time to Freaking Kilometer. Story seems good but lacking the grandiose the author wants to convey.