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StackThatCoin offers greeting, my fellow friends! Here I am to offer you a shameless (and brief) review of Stealing The Heavens!I've finished translating more than 100 chapters for StH, and to be honest, if you like Xianxia novel, this is one gem that you could not afford to miss! The background of the story is not unique, but the touch of politics made it stands out from the crowd. Oh, if you don't mind to have some 'hot scenes' in the novel you read, you'll enjoy StH very much! So, if you haven't voted for any novel today, I hope you can cast your vote for StH. And as for those who had voted, thank you! I gave my translation quality a four stars rating, as I am constantly learning and improving myself.
MC IS A COWARD, STUPID AND A SHUT -IN NERD. THE STORY DEVELOPMENT IS TOO SLOW I MEAN LITERALLY AFTER HE TRANSMIGRATES THE FIRST THING HE DOES IS TRYING TO RUN EVEN THOUGH HE CLEARLY KNOWS THAT HE IS IN A FAIRLY OVERPOWERED BODY AND THAT RABBIT DEMON IS 2 WHOLE LEVELS LOW IN COMPARISON BUT NOOOOO HE STILL TRIES TO RUN BUT I READ IT SOMEHOW TILL 55+ CHAPTERS AND IT WAS STARTING TO GET BETTER BUT MC WHO REALLY DOESNT KNOW HOW THE CULTIVATION WORLD WORKS ACCEPTED DISCIPLES AND NOT EVEN TRYING THAT ZEALOUS MAKING TECHNIQUES BECAUSE THERE IS STILL DAMN 30% CHANCE THAT THEY MIGHT BETRAY YOU BUT NOOOOOOO YOU HAD TO LEAVE THEM BE GIVE HIM YOUR EXCLUSIVE LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE. AUTHOR:YOU SHOULD ATLEAST TRY TO LEVEL HIS CULTIVATION TO 2 LEVELS HIGHER BEFOR GIVING HIM DISCIPLES AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN HIM HIS LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE BECAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A KIND OF UNIQUENESS TO THEIR POWERS. THATS ALL THANK YOU.
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Honestly one of the best originals on this site. My only regret is that so few people get to see this masterpiece under the tons of fluff on the site, but since the author hasn't signed any contracts with Qidian to give away his story, hopefully he can make it into a book and have it published. Bless. Exp.
I dunno if it's just because I've read too much stories...bur I found this plot too typical.The characters seems to have no distinction and while the writing itself is not bad and it is stable, there are no particular part that make it different than the other similar stories. The emotional part of characters are simply not there... Like when MC got his past lifes memories, he should have more reaction to it such as fear, shock, confusion, and who am I? Ren? Or am I *blah past lifes names*? And, another thing is even when he accept the past lifes memories, if a child got memories out of nowhere they will be influenced by it. It will create trouble. The personalities of his past lifes will not be easily resolved like you seemingly written.
Wonderful is good novel nice one good story good experience good character good design good background good story development good writing quality world background good overall nice good work
Webnovel is ushering to the Era of VR novels..HALLELUJAH...............................................................................................
As of chapter 47Writing Quality: 4/5Some spelling and grammer mistakes throughout the story. However this does not spoil the story and can be easily understood despite the minor mistakes. Story Development: 5/5Despite only being 47 chapters so far, the story development is interesting. The fact that the author plays the role of VR extremely prominently is nice, but it would be more interesting if the MC backstory was shown as well. The battle scenes are done really well in this novel. The fact that the intro of the game (trailer) gave the storyline a strong foothold is interesting as other authors tend to not use such things. This is very unique to this story so i give the author props for implementing this unique dynamic.Character Design: 4/5This takes into account that the novel is only 47 chapters long so far. There is little background information on the MC. How well to do his family is, etc. (there is some information but not alot). The side characters are not really evident at this point besides the female lead (potential love interest). Only some names are being thrown around here and there without any interesting or distinct facts about them.Updating Stability: 5/5I do not know the stability of the update as I read all 47 chapters in a day. I just place 5/5 as I consider it stable until further notice.World Background: 5/5The trialer of the game provided a good base for the VR world background. This is done better than most other novels. However, since this is a relatively new novel, there is a lot of room for world background expansion. I hooe the author can continue on this path as the expanaion of the world's background is exoanding at a nice pace.Overall: 4.6/5The story is really interesting and one that I will continue to follow. This is one of the better newer novels on this site. I think people should pick this up to read at least until this point. The MC can be considered overpowered in some manner (compared to other players), but the content is still really interesting. Hope the author continues to work hard on this novel ?
okay. wonderful start and characters. the story looks kind of unique and refreshing with so much potential in it. there were not many grammar mistakes too.I recommend all to give it a read
Not much character development or structure. I very rarely drop web novels that I start, but I can't force myself to continue this story. The MC lacks depth (which is easy to impart in a reincarnation genre), and all the character act like kids without common sense.
It's like a pokemon. But the Mc is As2hole. All about money. I think author is have a brain issue about he/she economic. Love money instead a women...? Yeah hope no one want thats money and killed Mc. Loser