This is so disgustingly trash full of drama reverse ra- pe and ra pe victim being lover you know where this is going the drama part the mc keeps on leaving women he slept with in dangerous situation mostly the married women and their daughter with trash or abusive husband (mom-daughter) they are so dumb more like retard just like the author. The authors keeps doing trash sh !Ts just for disgusting drama when mc can just end it with him bringing them to his home to those with whom he has slept with but nah he leaves the lanlord with the husband who will sell his own wife just for some penny (Mc knows her husband sold her to someone when he lost a beta to someone ) yet knowing that insteat of taking her with him he just gives her his number and leaves bro says he hates cliches yet is the one who is doing that just to create drama
The writing style could use some work, but other then that this story is great! I can honestly say I kept getting suprised by the author as to what was going to happen next to the MC, which is something rare to find on here. The story itself is very interesting, and stands out.I can't wait to read on and see what happens and just exactly what occurred in MCs past.Kudos to Author!
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 31/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 37)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A dark novel with a ruthless mc who loves to tortures only those who are criminals.long review: pros: 1) A completely original story. By original i meant the concept is original. And even if there are something similar to this, to me this is the first time I read something like this.2) This is a dark novel. Brutal and cruel. Mc ruthlessly tortures people and author describes it. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro, coz i was bored of fluffy novels)3) The only thing mentioned in this novel till now is how mc enjoys Ruthlessly torturing & killing criminals. Yeah no romance, no fantasy... Wait this might be a fantasy given system and all but yeah thats pretty much it... But then again this is interesting.4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. When break is needed from all those tortures you get a break, when you need to see the tortured ones, they are tortured.5) I love how the author mentions the user comments. That's a plus from me. Except for mc everyone has conversations.cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this is a dark novel. For people who love light hearted novel... Yeah don't even dare to read this one lol (This depends person to person, for me a pro)2) Zero character depth. The mc is not explained. Mc shows no emotions rather just a cold expression. Heck how the mc looks we don't even know. Same with other characters, they are introduced only for filling spots. 3) updates, this novel is inconsistent in updates at least till now it is. Only 24 chapters has been released till now but i guess ch/day may remain inconsistent even in the future coz one day its 5chaps while there is only 2 next day and then next day there is none.4) world building sucks. Nothing is explained. How the mc arrived in this world. Scratch that, we don't even know if this is original earth or a parallel one. I mean what we know is only from synopsis. Where he got system from, what is system, and everything else nothing about the world is mentioned.5)Little to no character interaction. Almost no conversations. Literally MC has almost no conversations. Even for a loner mc this is a bit too much.6) Idk if it's the author or TL but there are few mistakes... These mistakes can't be overlooked, for ex *SPOILER*A victim's tongue was cut by MC's methods, but he was still speaking (literally said roaring) with mc...IMO:- More conversations with MC &- a little bit of MC's background reveal will be appreciated.... But then again only 30+ chaps are revealed.RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-6)update: 78/10 (con-3)plot: 7.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1&4) characters: 7.5/10 (con-2)pacing: 8/10 (pro-4)dialogues: 8/10 (con-5)entertainment: 10/10OVERALL: 4/5 Conclusion:This novel has excellent potential! A dark and brutal mc who enjoys torturing. I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Next review after chap 100WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC may seem evil, but he is an anti- hero, though me may act evil in the future...- mc is very calculative. And he has never failed till date.
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Gotta be completely honest, read up to the whole time travel plot(which is always a bad move) and it completely killed all remaining interest in this work. It was dying even before, with all this sudden introductions of new characters, without any premises, and without any real need of them in the story(yes, I am looking at Elena). But the whole time travel plot? Killed it immediately.
author of super gene , lol aint gonna even bother . sg was total waste of my useless time and can probably guess how this will turn out with kind of **** synopsis
Gosh! I've missed your story. this story is more than interesting. thumb up to you Author...
I was excited for this book, since the time I have read its blurb❤❤❤
just amazingly written ...
the huge success of this book goes to Ronan , why ? because unlike other books ML he is really smart and knows his priorities, who to trust and who do not . i can't give spoiler but he is not only a green flag but a huge green forest Range. love this book so much. ...️
The story line wasn't strong. Not to mention it glorifies bullying to get what you want. Her childhood sucked because of one guy, and then ends up with him like it heals all those emotional traumas.
plz update we are waiting plzzzz update today