Quality-wise: The novel actually has a lot of punctuational and descriptional errors, therefore, I rated 3 stars. I suggest that the author uses Grammarly, It will improve the overall writing quality of the novel.Story: The story is still confusing with only 3 chapters out. Therefore it's still too early to judge whether it's good or bad so I rated it 3 stars. Neither too high or too low.Character Design: The characters are fleshed out at the start. We know some of Sia and Sid's (Main Characters I think?) traits so I gave 4 stars World Building: As for this we somehow know that Sia (MC) traveled to the future from an accident. Apparently, there are colonies and space travels in this story, so it is a definite outer space and sci-fi novel. However, again the novel only has few chapters out so it's really difficult to rate this right now so I just balanced it out to 3 stars. I'll revise my review in the future depending on the progress of the novel.
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This book is promising. I instantly love the characters. I hope I can get to know them better in the coming chapters. And longer chapters, please.
I live this novel. It is well written and the update schedule is decent. I can't wait for more chapters..................................................
Hello friends! I've decided to write a small review since WN doesn't allow non-exclusive books to be linked to any accounts!The story follows Miya Yuna, a recently deployed Space Patroller of the Ya'valt Galactic Federation after being manipulated by her superior with her only other choice being death.If I had to give this book three genres it would be... Psychological Horror, Space, and Action. This story is also rated M for Mature Audiences Only, as it has gore, sexual content, traumatizing material, and strong language.The book itself has tons of nifty subjects such as Artificial Intelligence, Dystopias, Futuristic Settings, and Outer Space. While elements of Hard Sci-Fi are entertained in the book, answering questions such as how planets operate, certain scientific elements, etc., it has some details that also make it very interesting yet educational to follow. So those that are actually interested in learning more can enjoy reading alongside those who want to continue moving along with the story.With all of that being said, if you want a story that's harboring monstrous yet unusual extraterrestrials, cosmic wars, gunfights, and cruel characters — All being combated by a ruthless female protagonist in the shape of a young half-bred girl, please continue!If you want to talk about the book, please don't hesitate to join the Discord link in the description.Want extra chapters, merch, and physical copies once the first volume completes? Check out my Patreon, @WinterTimeCrime!See you on the next page!
Though the story seemed serious, there is comic relief in it making me laugh while reading it.. ..Good job author with a good world along with cute and interesting characters. .. I loved it. .
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Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
The MC personality is not realistic for an adventure/fantasy setting. She is way to ***** and acts more like someone whose never been outside her house. The process of the characters is slow and the novel updates slowly. The novel has a lot of potential and I hope as the story moves along it'll get better and better.
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not bad of a story but why do they forget that when they do something in the past it will cause a butterfly effect and I hope that I won't see some stupid character otherwise its not bad at all
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